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My idol Nowadays, teenagers like me often admire singers, actors or politicians, etc and consider them as their idol. But, I am different from them. My idol is very simple and he is my father. He is a wonderful and energy father, but not perfect. After the war between Vietnam and American, Vietnamese people had to endure hardships. Like the others, my family was very poor. My grandparents had to work very hard to earn money to look after five children. Because my father was the first son, he must help his father most. When he was in grade 9 like me, he plow with his mother and did a lot of difficult works that now I don't know and maybe cry when I do them. Besides helping parents very much, my father was a pretty good student. Although he was born in a poor family, he gave him a leg up. So, now my dad has a master's degree about economy.To me, he is the greatest father. He always encourage me when I have some problems. He makes me smile again while I am upset. He cook for his children delicious dishes. And he buy everything I need. All in all, my father is so wonderful and admirable. I love my father so much. Thanks for your teaching and the care.

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Nowadays, teenagers like me often admire singers, actors or politicians, etc and consider them as their idol. But, I am different from them. My idol is very simple and he is my father. He is a wonderful and energy father, but not perfect. After the war between Vietnam and American, Vietnamese people had to endure hardships. Like the others, my family was very poor. My grandparents had to work very hard to earn money to look after five children. Because my father was the first son, he must help his father most. When he was in grade 9 like me, he plow with his mother and did a lot of difficult works that now I don't know and maybe cry when I do them. Besides helping parents very much, my father was a pretty good student. Although he was born in a poor family, he gave him a leg up. So, now my dad has a master's degree about economy.To me, he is the greatest father. He always encourage me when I have some problems. He makes me smile again while I am upset. He cook for his children delicious dishes. And he buy everything I need. All in all, my father is so wonderful and admirable. I love my father so much. Thanks for your teaching and the care.

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