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Hi. I've been learning English for two weeks and now I want to write anything on English. Please, correct me if you saw mistakes.
Today I want to write about my town. I've been in Smolensk for more than twenty years. It's small town. It has thirty thousand people. My town is very green. There are many trees, flowers, parks in town. There are many swans in central park. I like to walk in the evening and enjoy the view. Centr of town is not big, but it is very cosy. You can come here in any time for read book or for look at the birds. I think it's good.
Smolensk is calm quiet and friendly town mostly and I glad it.
Well it's all. Thank you for attention.
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First note
Hi. I've been learning English for two weeks and now I want to write something in English. Please, correct me if you see mistakes.
Today I want to write about my town. I've been in Smolensk for more than twenty years. It's a small town. It has a population of thirty thousand people. My town is very green. There are many trees, flowers and parks in the town. There are many swans in the central park. I like to walk in the evening and enjoy the view. The center of town is not big, but it is very cozy. You can come here at any time to read a book or to look at the birds . I think it's nice.
Smolensk is usually a calm, quiet and friendly town and I like it.
Well it's all. Thank you for your attention.
Note: birdwatch ->> to look at or watch birds
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First note
Hi. I've been learning English for two weeks and now I want to write anything in English. Please, correct me if you saw mistakes.Today I want to write about my town. I've been in Smolensk for more than twenty years. It's a small town. Thirty thousand people live there. My town is very green. There are many trees, flowers, parks in the town. There are many swans in central park. I like to walk in the evening and enjoy the view. The center of the town is not big, but it is very cosy. You can come here any time to read a book or for looking at the birds. I think it's good.
Smolensk is calm quiet and friendly town mostly and I glad it.
Well it's all. Thank you for attention. Неплохо написано, как для начала. Возможно, я где-то что-то пропустил. Самое главное - не пропускать артикли у существительных. Если этому научиться, сразу впечатление меняется. А вообще успехов вам в изучении!
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