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Going back to my hometown I'm going back to my hometown during summer holiday. My hometown is Nagasaki prefecture, which is the western part of Japan. My hometown has beautiful sea and fresh seafood, so I always eat raw fish and sushi during stay. My family is planing to go to a good sushi restaurant this time. I can't wait! Also, Many people from some foreign countries used to live in Nagasaki in Edo period (about 300 years ago). For example from Portugal, Netherlands and China. So we have many kinds of food originated these countries. I love the unique culture in my hometown.

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*I highlighted the areas I corrected in yellow so you can see better.  In the sentence where you mention Nagasaki I changed the 2nd "in" to "during" because even though "in" works in most cases, it sounds weird to hear it back to back the way you wrote it.  Also, the sentence where you listed the countries was incomplete so I added the subject that was implied from the previous sentence.  Unlike Japanese, you generally can't have an English sentence without a subject even if it is implied.  If you have questions, feel free to message me and ask!  勉強が頑張って！


Going back to my hometown

I'm going back to my hometown during the summer holiday.  My hometown is Nagasaki prefecture, which is the western part of Japan. My hometown has a beautiful sea and fresh seafood, so I always eat raw fish and sushi during my stay.  My family is planing to go to a good sushi restaurant this time.  I can't wait!
Also, many people from some foreign countries used to live in Nagasaki during the Edo period (about 300 years ago). For example, some people come from Portugal, Netherlands and China.  So we have many kinds of food originating from these countries.  I love the unique culture in my hometown.
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Going back to my hometown

I'm going back to my hometown during my summer holiday. My hometown is in Nagasaki prefecture, which is the western part of Japan. My hometown has beautiful sea and fresh seafood, so I always eat raw fish and sushi during my stay. My family is planing to go to a good sushi restaurant this time. I can't wait!
Also, many people from some foreign countries used to live in Nagasaki in during the Edo period (about 300 years ago). For example, people from Portugal, Netherlands and China. So we have many kinds of food that originated in these countries. I love the unique culture in my hometown.


Very good

Now I want to visit Nagasaki.

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