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Chile flagJohanna Muñoz
#7 The cellphone I think that the cellphone an indispensable artefact. For example in my family, my husband occupy the cellphone for the work, he is independent and he need call her clients. For him is necessary. My eldest daughter, is sixteen years old, need the cellphone for call me when she have a change in your schedule or when she have a problem. Sometimes she pass hours talkimg with yours friens or watchong tv but this have easy solution, parental control. Is very necessary.

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#7 The cellphone

I think that the cellphone is an indispensable artefact essential tool. For example in my family, my husband occupy the uses his cellphone for the work. He is independent freelance and he needs to call her (his) clients. For him it is necessary a necessity. My eldest daughter is sixteen years old and needs the cellphone for to call me when she have there is/she has a change in your her schedule or when she have has a problem. Sometimes she pass spends hours talking with yours her friends or watchoing tv but this have there is an easy solution for this:, parental control. Is This is very necessary.
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#7 The cellphone

I think that the cellphone an indispensable artifact. For example in my family, my husband uses/needs the cellphone for the work, he is independent and he needs to call his clients. For him it is necessary. My eldest daughter, who is sixteen years old, needs the cellphone to call me when she has a change in her schedule or when she has a problem. Sometimes she passes hours talking with her friends or watching tv but this has an easy solution, parental control. It  Is very necessary.


** Nice work! It is more common to say "she spends hours talking with her friends..." but passes is OK too. 

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#7 The cellphone

I think that the cellphone is an indispensable artefact. For example, in my family, my husband occupy uses the cellphone for the work; he is independent and he needs to call her his clients. For him, it is necessary. My eldest daughter  is sixteen years old and needs the a cellphone for  to call me when she have has a change in your her schedule or when she have has a problem. Sometimes she pass spends hours talkimg talking with yours friens her friends or watchong watching tv, but this have has easy solution- parental control. It is very necessary.

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