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We left for a bike ride far outside the city to take the picture. We were little lost, the dogs chased us and we found new trails. Our skin of the backs burned in the sun and we were very tired, but still it was an unforgettable adventure.
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I'm not sure that this text is correctly written. Help please.
We left for a bike ride far outside the city to take the picture. We were little lost, dogs chased us and we found new trails. The skin on our backs burned in the sun and we were very tired, but still it was an unforgettable adventure.How I would write it as a native english speaker...
We went for a bike ride far outside the city to take the picture. On the way, we got lost, were chased by dogs and discovered new trails. The skin on our backs burned from the sun. We were tired at the end but it was still an unforgettable adventure for us.
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