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Substance of homework is "make new and unique invention"
Do you love hungry? Of course, No!! Students always fight hungry. We have a mutual problem. It is we have to eat lunch in class without detection from observer (great teacher). You want to solve the problem, but you don’t know how to way. Answer is “pench box”!! It is very easy to use and reasonable price. This item is give perfect assurance that you can eat lunch safely, All-time you want to eat.
The pench box is an invention designed by entrepreneurial venture composed of student who studied materials science. It made from new materials (hyper ceramic PWO-4) that inventor was dug up in these days. In addition, this material is very low cost, so we don’t spend high price for pench box. The useful box is three-tier. Bottom tier is for accompanying dish, mid tier is for food staple (rice, bread, etc…), the top of tier is for something writing. Therefore, if observer (respecter) try to come near, you can’t be better than cover lunch by part of pencil goods. You can avert a crisis if you use PENCH BOX. I have a question, if observer’s nose is better than the others, can we not use the pench box? No problem. Because the box is made from special materials PWO-4.
PWO-4 has ability odor eliminating, so we can’t feel smell of foods.
How do we use the pench box? It is very simple. Have you used pencil case? Maybe, everyone’s answer is YES. Please remember how to use it. First, you get out pench box from your bag and put it on the desk in the course of nature. Second, open the cover and get out chopstick like getting out pencil. This is over. After, you enjoy eating lunch. The pench box does some cheerleading for everyone who feels hungry. The pench box is affable for your budget. The pench box be meant just for you. Please enjoy lunch time with miraculous box.
（※PWO-4 is made-up materials.）
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This is very funny! One question though did you mean to say "pinch" or did you intend to say "pench?"
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My homework
Please check my mistakes.
Substance of homework is "make new and unique invention"
Do you like being hungry? Of course not!! Students always fight when they are hungry. We all have a problem. It is that we have to eat lunch in class without detection from an observer. (The great teacher) You want to solve this problem, but you don’t know how. The answer is “pench box”!! It is very easy to use and starts at a reasonable price. This item gives perfect assurance that you can eat lunch safely, anytime you want to eat.
The pench box is an invention designed by an entrepreneurial venture composed of students who studied various scientific materials . It is made from new materials (hyper ceramic PWO-4) that an inventor recently dug up. In addition, this material is very low cost, so we don’t spend much on production costs for the pench box. The useful box has three tiers. The bottom tier is for an accompanying dish, the middle tier is for a staple food (rice, bread, etc…), and the top tier is a writing surface so you can hide your food if an observer walks by. You can avert a crisis if you use the PENCH BOX. I have a question. If the observer’s nose is good at sniffing things out, can we still use the pench box? No problem! Because the box is made from special PWO-4 materials.
PWO-4 has an odor eliminating ability, so the smell will stay in the box and the area will be odor free.
How do we use the pench box? It is very simple. Have you used a pencil case before? Maybe your answer is YES. Please remember how to use it. (We do not say "please" followed by an "action" nearly as much as the Japanese do) First, you retrieve the pench box from your bag and put it on the desk. in the course of nature. Second, open the cover and get out your chopsticks just like getting out your pencils. That is all. After, you enjoy eating your lunch, the pench box does some cheerleading for everyone who feels hungry. The pench box is affordable for all budgets. The pench box is meant just for you. Please enjoy lunch time with this miraculous box.
（※PWO-4 is made-up materials.）
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