An Intonation is very important.
Wednesday, 8th August, 2018

It was cool and nice this morning. but in the evening the This evening's rain today will be amazing refreshing.

Today I saw the an article on the internet. It said that my English isn't wasn't understandable because of bad poor intonation. I never thought an intonation is would be more important than a pronunciation.

I'll be consciousness of that when I speak English.


=== Clean Version ===
Intonation is very important.
Wednesday, 8th August, 2018

It was cool and nice this morning. This evening's rain will be refreshing.

Today I saw an article on the internet. It said that my English wasn't understandable because of poor intonation. I never thought intonation would be more important than pronunciation.

I'll be conscious of that when I speak English.
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=== Commentary ===
An Intonation is very important.
Wednesday, 8th August, 2018
[[ When making a declaration or statement, start with the noun and avoid using articles. ]]

It was cool and nice this morning. but in the evening the This evening's rain today will be amazing refreshing.
[[ Using the conjunctions 'and' with 'but' in the same sentence can become clumsy. Try to use them only once in a sentence and then end the sentence with a period or fullstop. Write your next idea with a new sentence. ]]
[[ Vary sentence structure by using the pronoun 'This' to start a sentence instead of using the article 'The'. This will improve your syntax and make your sentences flow better. ]]
[[ 'Amazing' could work if rain fills you with awe. More likely is 'refreshing' as it means 'to feel better'. ]]

Today I saw the an article on the internet. It said that my English isn't wasn't understandable because of bad poor intonation. I never thought an intonation is would be more important than a pronunciation.

I'll be consciousness of that when I speak English.
[[ Use 'an' when referring to one of many objects. Use 'the' when referring to a single object. ]]
[[ 'Conscious' is an adjective. 'Consciousness' is a noun. Use adjectives to describe yourself. 'I am beautiful' is correct, NOT 'I am beauty.' ]]
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