Please correct my self-introduction or, maybe there's a better way for me to find a good friend?

my name is Murphy, I'm a foodie and I also like cooking also. I just come came (past tense) to America four months ago. I'm still learning English right now. I really want to quickly improve my spoken English spoken.

So, I have come to here to try (or trying to) to make friends. Feel free to point out my mistakes, if I make them any. Thank you so much. BTW, I'm a Chinese native speaker, if you want to learn Chinese, I will try my best to teach you Chinese (try to avoid repetition) in exchange

Just some minor mistakes but really well written! :)

Please correct my self introduction. Or, maybe there's a better way to help me find a good friend?

My name is Murphy. I'm a foodie and I like cooking also. I just came to America four months ago and I'm still learning English right now. I really want to quickly improve my spoken English.

So, I have come here to try to make friends. Feel free to point out my mistakes, if I make them. Thank you so much. BTW, I'm a Chinese native speaker and if you want to learn Chinese, I will try my best to teach you in exchange.

Please correct my self-introduction Or Maybe there's a better way to let me find a good friend?

my name is Murphy, I'm a foodie and I like cooking also. I just come to America  four months  (Is it I just came for four months or I have been here for four months)? I'm still learning English right now. I really want to quickly improve my English spoken.

So, I come to here try to make friends Feel free to point out my mistake if I make them. Thank you so much. BTW, I'm a Chinese native speaker, if you want to learn Chinese I will try My best to teach you Chinese in exchange

Very little mistakes. Great job, Murphy. I encourage yo to keep learning!! and that's great you are here in the States!