Falling down
how can I get out of this?
I feel so weak, I have changed a lot
I Like to see the wonderful world, laugh
but nobody can laugh without a brother
I feel I die with him
I know a nice girl but I think she deserves a man strong
I´m in a circle and can´t up
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Falling down
How can I get out of this? I feel so weak...I have changed a lot. I'd like to see the wonderful world, laugh, but nobody can laugh without a brother. I feel like I died with him. I know a nice girl, but I think she deserves a stronger man. I´m in an endless cycle and can´t get up.Great job of using lexis in your sentences, to show how you feel. Just a few things I saw that needed attention. Firstly, remember to capitalize the first word of a sentence. Secondly, try to remember punctuation at the end of sentences. The last thing I will touch on is in your sentence you typed, "man strong," speaking of a girl that you like. Try to remember, that the word "strong" in this sentence is an adjective, which describes the noun. The noun is "man," and the adjective always follows the noun, e.g. "strong man." Other than that, I would encourage you to work on modal verbs and other verb forms. Great job!!!
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