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Fairy tale. " No matter how small you are. A Storycat" Chapter 2 When she went away into the street, an avalanche of rustles, rumblings, smells and emotions swept over her. Shreda hardly hold back herself on her paws, so as not to fall from weakness.Now she is alone and therefor she must be strong. "The one who must be strong just can not be weak" - her mom was always saying that. First of all she need a job. But she only a kitten. What she can do? Mom was always saying that she could do all what she wants and be anybody she wants. So, that's why it's needed (necessary) to decide what she wants to be... . Suddenly, the mouse slipped from the corner and disappeared behind the garbage can. "Just right now I want to be full" - thought Shreda - "How my mom was getting those mice? No! She definitely couldn't be a killer. Maybe she bought them? Already dead?" - Shreda didn't notice that say it aloud. Low laugh rang out behind the Shreda's back. The kitten shuddered and turn around. The elderly cat-woman was sitting on the hood of a parked car. She pressed down the hood something grey-colored by her paw. "You are going to be somebody's dinner, kid" - she said - "No. You are gonna be somebody's breakfast. To be alive for dinner time you should change your way of thinking right now. Otherwise you wont survive even half a day. Believe me kid. I'm here for 5 years. And don't ask me what price I paid for it." Shreda didn't know should she talk to this woman, who was obviously not from high society. If her mother was with her, she definitely would not. But now the kitten wanted to be somebody's child so badly, that Shreda was grateful to her for this talking and for this strange advise. "It's my first day here" - answered Shreda. "You haven't to say, I can see for myself. And what I'll tell you: never say it to somebody, because it can be the last words you said. You will be easy and funny prey." - the old cat laughed - Then she stopped and dropped from the car what she held by her paw. It was a mouse. - "Take it for now. You need some energy. The day will be long."

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Shreda didn't know whether she should she talk to this woman, who was obviously not from high society. If her mother was with her, she definitely would not. But now the kitten wanted to be somebody's child so badly, that Shreda was grateful to her for this talking to her and for this strange advise advice. 

"It's my first day here" - answered Shreda. 
"You haven't to don't have to say, I can see for myself. And what I'll tell you what: never say it to somebody, because it can be the last words you said say. You will be easy and funny prey." - the old cat laughed - Then she stopped and dropped from the car what she held by with her paw. It was a mouse. - "Take it for now. You need some energy. The day will be long."


I'm enjoying the story!  The picture is so cute!  :-)

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Fairy tale. " No matter how small you are. A Storycat" Chapter 2

When she went away into the street, an avalanche of rustles, rumblings, smells and emotions swept over her. Shreda hardly hold back herself on her paws, so as not to fall from weakness.  (Could you tell me this sentence in Russian?  I'm not sure what you mean to say.)  Now she is was alone and therefore she must be strong. "The one who must be strong just can not cannot be weak" - her mom was always saying that.

First of all she needed a job. But she was only a kitten. What she can could she do? Mom was always saying that she could do all what she wants whatever she wanted and be anybody she wants wanted. So, that's why it's it was needed (necessary) to decide what she wants wanted to be... . Suddenly, the a mouse slipped from the corner and disappeared behind the a garbage can. "Just right now I want to be full" - thought Shreda - "How was my mom was getting those mice? No! She definitely couldn't be a killer. Maybe she bought them? Already dead?" - Shreda didn't notice that she said say it aloud.

Low laughter rang out behind the Shreda's back. The kitten shuddered and turn around. The An elderly cat-woman was sitting on the hood of a parked car. She pressed something grey-colored down onto the hood something grey-colored by with her paw. "You are going to be somebody's dinner, kid" - she said - "No. You are gonna be somebody's breakfast. To be alive for dinner time you should change your way of thinking right now. Otherwise you won't survive even half a day. Believe me, kid. I'm I've been here for 5 years. And don't ask me what price I paid for it."

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