What about my day today?
Yesterday I came back to parent's home.It is a nice place in a wonderful surrounding of big amount of verdure. Today I took the sun at the terrasse. Cloudiness took turns to clearness. After being in a polluted city as Saint-petersburg is, there is a marvelous opportunity to become relaxed. After having a sunbath I drove to the lake with my father. I was swimming with the ducks, but the water was enough cold. Nevertheless, I did it .And I hope I'll do it tomorrow. Time to enjoy the summer is just started. I'm going to take from this all!
Will you please correct my mistakes?
Thank you!
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What about my day today?
Yesterday I came back to my parent's home. It is a nice place in a wonderful surrounding of big amounts of verdure. Today I took the sun at the terrace. Cloudiness took turned to clearness. After being in a polluted city as Saint-petersburg is, there is it was a marvelous opportunity to become relaxed. After having a sunbath I drove to the lake with my father. I was swimming with the ducks, but and the water was enough quite cold. Nevertheless, I did it. And I hope I'll do it tomorrow. Time to enjoy the summer has just started. I'm going to take from this all!Will you please correct my mistakes?
Thank you!
Really good! I don't think the last sentence ('I'm going to take from this all!') translates well in English, though. I don't understand its meaning completely
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