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Solitude Recently I've read an article about being alone. It mentioned that isolation could bring great damages to both one's physical and psychological health. It sounds quite sensible. However, I myself have been solitary for almost six days and I hardly feel any sensation of that. It's ture that sometimes I think about having someone accompany me, but it also means I have to get used to another person's lifestyle.I have to take care of the other's feelings and needs.And what if it turns out that I can't get along with this partner. Afterall, I am not very much of an outgoing people, and interaction with other people who shares a roof with me would be a problem, especially if I don't know the fellow well. Therefore, I would rather live alone than connect with any inappropriate partner.Plus, isn't it quoted by many people that"being alone is an inevitable path to be mature". (Thanks to a friend who corrected my article and pointed out that my article was a little confusing , so I think it's necessary for me to clarify I didn't mean relationship, but a general company partner.what I am trying to say is that I am capable of living alone and I will never have any mental or physical illness)

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Solitude

Recently I've read an article about being alone. It is mentioned that isolation could bring cause great damages to for both one's physical and psychological health. It sounds quite reasonable. However, I myself have been solitary for almost six days and I have hardly felt any sensation of that. It's true that sometimes I think about having someone who is accompanying me, but it also means I have to get used to another person's someone's lifestyle.I have to take care of the other's feelings and needs.And what if it turns out that I can't get along with this partner. Afterall, I am not very much of an outgoing person, and interactions with another people who shares the  roof with me would be a problem, especially if I don't know the fellow person well. Therefore, I would rather live alone than connect with any inappropriate partner.Plus Moreover, it isn't quoted by many people that"being alone is an inevitable path to being mature".
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Solitude

Recently I've read an article about being alone. It mentioned that isolation could bring/cause great damages to both one's physical and psychological health. It sounds quite sensible/reasonable. However, I myself have been solitary for almost six days and I hardly feel any sensation of that. It's true that sometimes I think about having someone accompany me, but it also means I have to get used to another person's lifestyle.I have to take care of the other's feelings and needs.And what if it turns out that I can't get along with this partner. Afterall, I am not very much of an outgoing people person, and interaction with other people who shares a roof with me would be a problem, especially if I don't know the fellow person well. Therefore, I would rather live alone than connect with any inappropriate partner. Plus/Also, isn't it quoted/said by many people that "being alone is [an inevitable]/the path to maturity/becoming mature" ?
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Solitude

I've recently read an article about being alone. It mentions that isolation could bring great create damage, to both one's physical and psychological health. It sounds quite reasonable sensible, however, I myself have been solitary for almost six days and I hardly feel any sensation of damage to my health. It's true that sometimes I think about having someone accompany me, but it also means I have to get used to another person's lifestyle. I have to take care of the other persons feelings and needs. What if it turns out that I can't get along with this partner? (Are you talking about a relationship or sharing a house with a roommate?) 

After all, I am not very much of an outgoing person, and interactions with other people who share the same roof with me, would be a problem, especially if I don't know the fellow person well. (Fellow means man or boy, are you specifically talking about a male figure in your text? You jump from people in general to specific male character.)

Therefore, I would rather live alone than connect with an inappropriate partner. Plus, isn't it quoted by many people that "being alone is an inevitable path to being mature".


* I am confused as to whether you are talking about a relationship or just making sure you do not live isolated. 

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