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IELTS Big sporting events such as Olympic or World-cup need hosting country. However, to hold big sporting events have advantages and disadvantages for hosting country. Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others said that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. I agree with the opinion to hold sporting events in own country. First, I would like to talk about the benefits of holding big sporting events. First of all, hosting country teach people who live in other countries. The event broadcast worldwide. Many countries’ people can have an opportunity to watch. Also, they can have an opportunity to know the hosting country. Second of all, the hosting country can get many visitors who came to the hosting country to see the sporting event. The visitors spend money in the country. It leads to increase economy in the country. Second, I would like talk about problems to hold a sporting event in own country. First of all, the hosting country spends big money before holding the sporting event. To hold big sporting events, need many things such as stadiums. If the country does not have stadiums to do sport enough, they have to make a stadium for the event. Second of all, they have to protect from terrorism. Presidents in each country will come to the hosting country. Also, many people visit the country. Terrorists might target the country to happen terrorism. Overall, I agree with the opinion to hold a big sporting event in own country. To hold a sporting event, there are some risks as I said. However, those problems can solve. The first problem is to make new stadiums for the event. If the hosting county makes new stadiums, the new stadium will be a legacy in the country. Visitors might come to the country to see the stadium after the event. The second problem is terrorism. We can solve the problem to do immigration strictly. It is because terrorists cannot enter the country. In conclusion, I agree to hold bog sporting event in own country.

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Big sporting events such as the Olympics or World Cup need a hosting country. However, to hold big sporting events has/brings advantages and disadvantages for the hosting country. Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others say that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. I agree with the opinion to hold sporting events in your/one's own country.

First, I would like to talk about the benefits of holding big sporting events. First of all, the hosting country teaches people who live in other countries. The events are broadcasted worldwide. Many countries’ people can have an opportunity to watch. Also, they can have an opportunity to know the hosting country. Second of all, the hosting country can get many visitors who come to the hosting country to see the sporting event. The visitors spend money in the country. This leads to an increased economy in the country.

Second, I would like talk about problems to holding a sporting event in your own country. First of all, the hosting country spends big money before holding the sporting event. To hold big sporting events, they need many things such as stadiums. If the country does not have stadiums to do enough sports, they have to make a stadium for each new event. Second of all, they have to protect from terrorism. Presidents in each country will come to the hosting country. Also, many people will visit the country. Terrorists might target the country to cause terrorism.

Overall, I agree with the opinion to hold a big sporting event in your/one's own country. To hold a sporting event, there are some risks as I said. However, those problems can be solved. The first problem is to make new stadiums for the event. If the hosting county makes new stadiums, the new stadium will be a legacy in the country. Visitors might come to the country to see the stadium after the event. The second problem is terrorism. We can solve that problem by doing immigration strictly. This is because terrorists cannot enter the country. In conclusion, I agree to holding big sporting events in your/one's own country.

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