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No doubt, studying is a social activity. Students get feedback from professors and classmates, present their projects, defend the ideas, and communicate with each other. But very often students prefer to study with their peers or vice versa alone. I will state in this essay the main advantages and disadvantages of both studying methods.
Firstly, pointing out the advantages of studying on the one's own and in the same time disadvantages of studying with the group. Speaking about studying at university, it is a very common situation that students meet their peers who have different approaches to the studying. Someone needs two or three hours to learn new material when other can look through the article just for 30 minutes. Therefore, studying alone can be more effective because students can track their progress, use their own assessments system or punish themselves. Meanwhile, studying with others can distract from the main goals and bring on the wasting of time for the non-academic topics.
For example, when I studied at the university, I and my roommates had agreed to study together at the certain time, but almost always everyone had their constant problems: to finish watching the film, to call their parents or to end up with fitness training. Consequently, very often our appointments to study were delayed for two or more hours later. Next time when we started studying we just chatted, discussed the university`s rumors or the latest world news. Frankly, it was super inefficiently wasting of time.
Secondly, it is worth to mention the advantages of studying with the group of people. Frequently, solving sophisticated prompts with the group of peers can inspire to the new ideas or novel studying approaches as well. Additionally, working with people can help do not to miss the important information or useful events or even find the good friends with common interests. In this case, it goes to the disadvantages of studying alone.
For example, a few years ago I went to the English summer school where studied English with a group of people. During the one task in pairs, I got to know that my study partner was interested in the Latin-American culture as I am. These common interests unified us even after the graduation from the school.
To summarize, sometimes studying alone can benefit the student`s accomplishments, but on occasions of studying with a group of people can bring on the unpredictable moments.
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Secondly, it is worth to mentioning the advantages of studying with the group of people. Frequently, solving sophisticated problems with a group of peers can inspire new ideas or novel studying approaches as well. Additionally, working with people can help one not to miss important information or useful events or even find the good friends with common interests. These highlight the disadvantages of studying alone.
For example, a few years ago I went to anEnglish summer school where I studied English with a group of people. During the one task in pairs, I found out that my study partner was interested in the Latin-American culture as I am. These common interests unified us even after the graduation from the school.
To summarize, sometimes studying alone can be benifical to the student`s accomplishments, but occationally studying with a group of people can bring on the unpredictable results.
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Please correct an essay
No doubt, studying is a social activity. Students get feedback from professors and classmates, present their projects, defend their ideas, and communicate with each other. But very often students prefer to study with their peers or (visa versa would indicate their peers studying with them verses them studying with their peers) alternatively alone ( one could also say "just alone" or "on the other hand alone"). I will state in this essay the main advantages and disadvantages of both studying methods.
Firstly, pointing out the advantages of studying on the one's own and in at the same time disadvantages of studying with a group ( you could also say "studying within a group" or "studying in a group"). At a university, it is a very common that students meet their peers who have different approaches to studying. One student needs two or three hours to learn new material while another can look through the article just for 30 minutes and learn just as much. Therefore, studying alone can be more effective because students can track their progress, use their own assessments system to reward or punish themselves. Meanwhile, studying with others can distract from the main goals and lead to the wasting of time with non-academic topics.
For example, when I studied at the university, I and my roommates had agreed to study together at a certain time, but almost always everyone had their constant problems: to finish watching film, to call their parents or to get their exercising in. Consequently, very often our appointments to study were delayed for two or more hours later. Other times when we started studying we just chatted, discussed the university`s rumors or the latest world news. Frankly, it was super inefficiently wasteing of time.
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