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Is the article correct? One day, a foreigner traveled Taiwan. He wanted to eat local food for lunch. When he went to traditional noodle's store. He said:" I wanted the most cheaper noodle please" he seat next to the employer's kid. He talked with the boy, the boy was excited, because he met foreigners first, he decided to draw the picture as the gift for foreigner. Although the noodles weren't expensive, it tasted good. After eating, he paid for lunch. When he left the store, employer and boy found a bag. It was even heavy and contained an army of money. When they deliberated whose the bag it is. A thief ate noodles near, at the mean time he suddenly said loudly"It's mind. "But the boy thought paradox, so he told his mother. They decided to coordinate with each other taking the big bag to police office. However, the thief found anybody didn't focus on the bag. He carried it away by himself. The boy shortly ran after him and then he said"Help me, he stole many money." At that time, everybody surrounded him, until the police officer coming. The police officer asked the boy narrate context, the police officer thanked to everybody help. The foreigner achieved the station, he found he lost his bag. He was very urgent, so he asked everyone where is the police office, a warm-hearted citizen talked to him. When he attained the police office, the police officer was looking for who lost the bag, so he was extremely urgent, he asked anyone where is the police office, a warm-hearted people talk to him. He attained the police office, the police officer was looking for who lost it. Eventually, it was a happy ending. The foreigner found money of taking doctor. Because he came down with the cancer, he went to Taiwan healed it. He known Taiwan medicine technology was good, so he willing paid money a lot to alive, as he had a younger cute kid. Through the experience, he felt Taiwanese do kind-hearted.

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One day, a foreigner traveled Taiwan. He wanted to eat local food for lunch. When he went to a traditional noodle store, he said:" I wanted the cheapest noodles, please" he sat next to the owner's son. He talked with the boy, the boy was excited. Because he met a foreigner for the first time, he decided to draw a picture as the gift for the foreigner. Although the noodles weren't expensive, they tasted good. After eating, he paid for lunch. When he left the store, the owner and the boy found a bag. It was really heavy and full of money. They debated whose bag it was. A thief was eating noodles nearby, he suddenly said out loud "It's mine"! "But the boy thought this was strange, so he told his mother. They decided to consult with each other and take the big bag to the police station. However, the thief saw nobody was focused on the bag. He carried it away by himself. The boy quickly ran after him and then he yelled: "Help me, he stole a lot of money!" At that moment, everybody surrounded him, until the police officer came. The police officer asked the boy to explain what happened. The police officer thanked everybody for the help.

The foreigner arrived at the station, he found he lost his bag. It was very urgent, so he asked everyone where the police station was. A kind-hearted citizen talked to him. When he arrived at the police station, the police officer was looking for the person who lost the bag.  Eventually, it was a happy ending. The foreigner found money to take to the doctor. Because he had cancer, he went to Taiwan to heal it. He knew Taiwan's medical technology was good, so he willingly paid a lot of money to live, as he had a younger cute kid. Through the experience, he felt Taiwanese kindness.

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