A Big Bag Mistake
I learn words about write story so please if I made mistakes correct them for me
A story started when Amal seated besides Ali in Airplane. Ali is a good person but not quite. Amal like quite person and doesn’t like noise. When he go into a airplane and see a pretty girl. He says Hi! and he smiles. She is reading a book and when he says hi, she looks up from book and say hello but doesn’t smile. Three hours later, they arrived and go into the building and wait their bags. She sees a blue bag and thinks that it is her bag and take it and go away. When he take his a blue bag too, he discover that it’s not his bag but it is a bog to a pretty girl. He look for it and find her address and go to her and give her bag. When he say give me his bag, she says sorry but a thief take it and go away I look for it in up and down street but i don’t find them. He says ok no problem, in my bag just dirty jeans and dirty shirt.
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I learn words by writing stories, so if I made any mistakes, please correct them for me.
A Big Bag Mistake
Ali was a good person but not a quiet person. Amal was a quiet person who didn't like noise. When Ali got on the airplane, his seat was next to Amal. He said Hi! and he smiled. She was reading a book and when he said hi, she looked up from book and said hello but didn’t smile. Three hours later, they arrived and went into the building and waited for their bags. She saw a blue bag. She thought that it was her bag, so she took it and left. When he took his blue bag, he discovered that it was not his bag, but Amal's bag. He looked for her address in the bag. He went to her home and gave her her bag. When he asked for his bag, she said she was sorry but a thief had stolen it. He said that it was not a problem because the bag just had dirty jeans and a dirty shirt.
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A Big Mistake is that I learn words from writing stories. So, please if I made any mistakes correct them for me.
The story started when Amal was seated beside Ali in an airplane. Ali is a good person ,but not quiet. Amal likes quiet people and doesn’t like noise. When he got onto the airplane he saw a pretty girl. He said "Hi!" and smiled. She was reading a book and when he said hi, she looked up from the book and said "Hello" ,but didn't smile. Three hours later, they arrived and went into the building to wait for their luggage . She saw a blue bag, thought that it was her bag, took it and went away. When he took his blue bag as well, he discovered that it wasn't his bag, but that it belonged to the pretty girl. He looked for her, found her address and went to her to give her the bag.When he asked for his bag, she said that a thief stole it from her and ran away, and that she searched for the theif everywhere but couldn't find him. He said that it wasn't a problem as it only had dirty jeans and dirty shirts.
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nice story i like it,My name is said Joseph can we practise together to improve our english.
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