A story about Tinkers island:
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Its story about a father and his daughter. Name of father is Sam and name of his daughter is Jinny. One day they walk in street to go to home when a thief who give Sam watch and run away. Then a policemen catch Sam and put him in prison. Jinny become sad because she has just her father, she doesn't has mother or sister or brother. After three weeks, Jinny run away her father from pirson and go to island and they call that island by tinker island. They live in it happily.
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A story about Tinkers island: Please if I made any mistakes correct them to me.
This is a Its story about a father and his daughter. The Name of the father is Sam and the name of his daughter is Jinny. One day they were walking walk in the street to go to home when a thief who give gave Sam a watch and run ran away. Then a policemen catch caught Sam and put him in prison. Jinny become was sad because she has just her father, she doesn't has have a mother or sister or brother. After three weeks, Jinny run rescued her father from prison and go went to an island and they called that island by Tinker Island. They live in it there happily.Great work! Don't forget the articles "a" and "the"
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