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July 27th The last Friday, I was invited to join a birthday party. I had not attended a birthday party for a long time, and I forgot to buy a birthday present. As it was Friday, there were many people in town and restaurant. I felt a little tired because I don't like being with many people in a same place. Although the restaurant was full and noisy, I enjoyed talking with friends and eating some seafood, and tasty beers. Especially, raw oyster was good and matched with beer. We spend a nice time.

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The last Friday, I was invited to join a birthday party. I had not attended a birthday party for a long time, and I forgot to buy a birthday present. As it was Friday, there were many people in town and in the restaurant. I felt a little tired (Although I think annoyed fits better the situation) because I don't like being with many people in a same in crowded places (a crowded place is a place full of people). Although the restaurant was full and noisy, I enjoyed talking with friends and eating some seafood, and (drinking) tasty beers. Especially raw oysters matched with beer were good. We spent a nice time.

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