My life in the UK My name is Ana, I'm from Argentina but I live since 2010 in the UK; I came here with my husband for a better future, I'm a housewife, when I arrived I din't speak a single word of En

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My life in the UK My name is Ana, I'm from Argentina but I live since 2010 in the UK; I came here with my husband for a better future, I'm a housewife, when I arrived I din't speak a single word of English but I did my best to learn the language, I love the culture of this country, I live in Leeds and I used to live in York, and I'm very grateful because this country gave me the opportunity to have the life that I always dreamed, I would like that you share with me your experiences of your life in other country's or on holiday

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My life in the UK

My name is Ana, I'm from Argentina but I have been living since 2010 in the UK since 2010. I came here with my husband for a better future and I'm a housewife. When I arrived I didn't speak a single word of English but I did my best to learn the language. I love the culture of this country, I live in Leeds and I used to live in York, and I'm very grateful because this country gave me the opportunity to have the life that I always dreamed of, I would like that you share with me about your experiences of your life in other countries or when you go to other countries on holidays.

My life in the UK

My name is Ana, I'm from Argentina but I have lived (or: have been living) since 2010 in the UK since 2010; I came here with my husband for a better future; I'm a housewife. When I arrived I didn't speak a single word of English, but I did my best to learn the language. I love the culture of this country. I live in Leeds and I used to live in York, and I'm very grateful because that this country gave me the opportunity to have the life that I always dreamed of. I would like that you to share with me your experiences of your life in other country's countries or on holiday.

Notes: great job! You'll see above that I changed a lot of your commas to periods. Sentences generally end in periods (aside from items like punctuation marks, e.g. "!" and "?"). I recommend reviewing the use of commas and continuing your practice with them.

https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/

If you want to use commas to connect two sentences, perhaps this will help:

https://data.grammarbook.com/blog/commas/connecting-sentences-with-commas-and-semicolons/

Thanks for sharing your writing!

My life in the UK

My name is Ana, I'm from Argentina but I have lived since 2010 in the UK; I came here with my husband for a better future, I'm a housewife and when I arrived I didn't speak a single word of English but I did my best to learn the language, I love the culture of this country. I live in Leeds but I used to live in York, and I'm very grateful because this country gave me the opportunity to have the life that I always dreamed. I would like that you share with me your experiences of your life in other country's or on holiday

I hope you and your family are enjoying life in England :)

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