Essay: The impact of communication and socialisation online Hey guys, I'm trying to improve my writing skills. Could someone correct the following essay? Nowadays, it is not only common to communicate via social networks but also to be socialized because of the increasing time people spend online. Firstly, the aim of every social network is that you consume as much as possible. That's why most websites are include an almost endless timeline. Hence there is the risk that your life outside the internet suffer a lot and you end up with only online friends. However, it's easier than ever before to meet people with the same interests. This is also a good opportunity to get to know new cultures. Additionally it brings up a lot of advantages when you organize groups or events. Third, the suggestion that you get in social networks are based on your friends, the topics your are interested in, your search activity and other personal information. So you only get to know content that matches with your opinion. This effect - called filter bubble - can be the reason for why you may not understand other world views. In conclusion, with the socialisation online you have to opportunity to get to know new people with same the interests and world views. In contrast you risk to get isolated from real friends and only exist in your own 'filter bubble'.