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Today's diary Today I took an English lesson with online teacher. Today's topic is that the salary of athletes is expensive or not. I assume that salary of them depend on the popularity of their sports because their salary comes from contract fee with sponsor or ticket fee from audience of their game. So if we think their salary is high, it means their sports is very popular. But in the same sports, there is huge gap in player's salary. It comes from their performance. I think it is a little strict but it is good because the gap makes them motivated.

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Today's diary

Today I took had an English lesson with an online teacher. Today's topic is that was whether the salary of athletes is expensive high or not.

I assume that their salary of them depends on the popularity of their sport they play. because their I believe this, as their salary comes from their contracts fee with sponsors or and ticket fee sales from the audience attending games.

In conclusion, if we think that their salary is high, this could mean their sport is very quite popular.

In saying that, there is a huge gap in player's salaries within the same sport. I think this comes down to their performance. I think it is a little strict but it is good because the gap makes them motivated.

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Today's diary

Today I took an English lesson with an online teacher. Today's topic is was whether or not that the salary of athletes is are too high expensive or not. I assume that the salary of them an athlete depends on the popularity of their sports because their salary comes from contract fees with sponsors or ticket fees from the audience of their games.
So if we think their salary is high, it means their sports is very popular.

But even within the same sports, there is a huge gap in between different players' salaries. It comes  is caused by from the difference in their performances. I think it is a little strict but it is good because the gap makes them motivated.


I changed couple of things. It mainly was related to word choice and flow. I hope you find this helpful.

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