My day Hey Max Yesterday the holidays have begun. Now I have two wekks where I can do nothing. Nothing for school nothing for other People. I can sit all the day in my bed or watch Tv. But sometimes I

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My day Hey Max Yesterday the holidays have begun. Now I have two wekks where I can do nothing. Nothing for school nothing for other People. I can sit all the day in my bed or watch Tv. But sometimes I will go out because I have training. I never went in so short holidays to an other City. My parents went to Turkey. They said that it is really nice. There will be there for ten days. The trainig could be very nice. I have a friend there we laugh so much it is very funny. The Problem is that we lost our last game so our Coach will be very strict today he hate it to lose. We can not win every time. After training I will watch Tv. I go to a friend where we will watch a film. He told me that the he has not the film until yet. But he has heard that this a very good film. I was a little bit excited because I do not usaually watch film often. In the end I have to say that the film was very good and I hope that a second part come out soon. Was is your favourit film. See you soon

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My day

Hey Max
Yesterday the holidays have begun began. Now I have two wekks weeks where I can do nothing don't have to do anything. Nothing for school nothing for other Ppeople. I can sit all the day in my bed or watch Tv. But sometimes I will go out because I have training. I"ve never went gone in so short holidays to another Ccity during such short holidays. My parents went to Turkey. They said that it is really nice. There They will be there for ten days.
The training could be very nice. I have a friend there and we laugh so much. it is very funny a lot of fun. The Pproblem is that we lost our last game so our Ccoach will be very strict today. hHe hate it hates to lose. We cannot win every time. After training I will watch Tv. I will go to a friend's house where we will watch a film. He told me that the he has not seen the film until yet. But he has heard that this a very good film. I was a little bit excited because I do not usaually watch films often. In the end I have to say that the film was very good and I hope that a second part comes out soon.
Was is your favourite film.?
See you soon

Here's some feedback:

If you give a specific time when something happened in the past (yesterday, last week, at 6 o'clock this morning, etc), you have to use the past simple. This is similar to the Präteritum form in written German, e.g. gestern begann was auch immer.

In English we only capitalize names and the first word in a sentence. Everything else, including nouns, is written in with small letters.

We don't normally say "go to a friend" when we meet someone. If you meet them in their home, you normally give the physical place (I wen't to a friend's house, I went to my friend's new flat, etc). If you're not meeting at their home or if you don't want to say the place, you can use the verb "meet," e.g. I'm meeting my friend later.

I hope this helps! =)

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