He Has no Words
It seems I didn’t write anything about my cat long time. He was named Bublic. If I try to pat Bublic he starts biting me every time. He does it not very strong, but painful enough. My cat isn’t angry and his biting is just a way of communication with me. Of course, Bublic is the ill-bred cat. I told him that biting of owner is wrong, but probably he didn’t understand me.
Bublic came to me from a pat’s shelter, he was already the adult cat. He had lost in the countryside. Maybe his owners forgot him in a village, maybe he escape from their, I don’t know. His tail was broken in several places, I don’t know what had happened. Unfortunately, Bublic can’t tell me about his life in past.
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He Has No Words
It seems that I didn’t write anything about my cat for a long time. He was is named Bublic. If Whenever I try to pat Bublic, he starts biting me. every time He does it not bite very *hard strong, but it is painful enough. My cat isn’t angry and his biting is just a way of he is just trying to communicate with me by biting. Of course, Bublic is an ill-behaved the ill-bred cat. I told him that biting of owner it is wrong to bite his owner, but probably he probably doesn’t understand me.Bublic came to me from an animal shelter, and he was already the an adult then cat. He had was lost in the countryside. Perhaps his previous owners forgot about him in a village, or he escaped from them. I don’t know. His tail bone was is broken in several places, I don’t know what had happened. Unfortunately, Bublic can’t tell me about his life in the past.
* We can use the word "hard" to describe an action that is performed with great force or effort.
Example: They studied hard (not strong). / They gave him a hard (not strong) stare. / The dog bit the suspect hard (not strong) in the leg.
Take note: In your first paragraph, you are describing Bublic's character, therefore, you use present tense. In the first three sentences of your second paragraph, you are describing Bublic in the past, therefore, you use past tense.
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Hazel, my cat is alive and sometimes bites me
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Firstly, I'd like to say - I love cats, so this is why I have to ask a question, before I correct your entry. Your tenses are a little muddled, and I am not sure if you are sharing memories of a cat that has since passed away, or one that is very much alive and biteing you?
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