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Iniesta and Torres Last week, I watched a football game of Japanese league on TV. I wanted to watch the new super J-leaguer Andrés Iniesta. He moved to Japan this month and it was a first game for him. It is really amazing. One of Spanish super star, Fernando Torres will play also in Japan. I want to watch their game at a stadium someday. Could you please check my writing? Thank you.

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Iniesta and Torres

Last week, I watched a Japanese league football game on TV.
I wanted to watch the new super J-leaguer Andrés Iniesta.
He moved to Japan this month and it was his first game.
It (He? The games (are)?) is really amazing.
One of the Spanish superstars, Fernando Torres, will also play in Japan / is also playing in Japan soon.
I want to watch their game at a stadium someday.

Could you please check my writing? Thank you.
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Thank you very much for your help, Evan! Wow, I want to be a good English speaker. 英文を教えてくれてありがとうございます。いつか、こんな文章が書けるようになりたいです(笑)*はい、パスは、サッカーの場合は、他の選手に蹴ることです。His pass course or pass line is marvelous. Have a good weekend.('-'。)
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イニエスタの大ファンだそうですね 笑。でも今、Jリーグにそういう上手な選手が来ているから、確かにより人気になって、前より試合を観るのは楽しいでしょうね。 You seem to be a big fan of his! lol Now that such good players like him are playing in the J-league, surely it will get more popular and become more entertaining to watch. 上の書いた部分は英語で: Thank you very much. Usually I don't watch the J-league (matches), but I watched it this time since Iniesta was playing. *Even a world class player's pass is interesting (to me). It looks like (since) Iniesta came, the amount of tickets sold rose remarkably. I think it's a great thing if (these kinds of) superstars come to play in the J-league and the skill level is raised. 間違えがあるかもしれませんけど、役に立ったら嬉しいです。 There may mistakes but if that helps I'm glad. *パスというのは、例えばサッカー試合で、ある選手はボールを他の選手に蹴るということですか?
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ありがとうございます。普段は、Jリーグは見なかったんですけど、イニエスタが来たので、見ました。ワールドクラスのプレイは、パス一つでも面白いです。イニエスタが来て、チケットの売上もグンと上がっているらしいです。Jリーグにスーパースターがどんどん来て、Jリーグのレベルが上がると良いなと思います。I wanted to write about this but I couldn't... こんなことを英語で書きたかったのですが、まだ書けません(ノ∀`)
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面白いですねー。僕はJ-leagueのことを聞いたことがないですよ。 That sounds interesting, I've never heard of the J-league before. スタジアムでそういう試合を観るのは、すごい経験になるでしょうね。 I imagine seeing that kind of game in person would be awesome!

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