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if somebody has become a very popular child his current friends might not want to has him as a friend because of being afraid of not fitting to him anymore. Rich kids are not used to being taken photo of them and being followed by paparazzi. They want to have fun and feel free when they are young. The amount of money they have earned might overwhelmed there also young rich children might consider stop attending classes and it might lead to stop them growing intellectually.
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If somebody has become a very famous child, their current friends might not want to be their friend anymore because they are afraid of not relating to them anymore. Most kids are not used to having photos of them taken and being followed by paparazzi. They want to have fun and feel free when they are young. The amount of money they have earned might overwhelm them. Also, young, rich children might consider stopping attending classes which might lead to stopping their intellectual growth.
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