Living Alone during One Hundred Days
There is a picture named " One Hundred Days of Loneliness" on the experience lived by a man who aimed to be staying alone in a forest for three months. He filmed it using a drone as well as several cameras, including small ones handed with sticks for selfies. As he said in a certain moment in the movie, he was inspired by "Walden" the famous Thoureau's book, which is a kind of Bible for people who think that human being need to rebuild his relationship with Nature. I encourage you to see it, not only for the magnificient footages of Natural Park of Redes, located at Asturias (North Spain) but also for its message.
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Living Alone during One Hundred Days
There is a picture named movie called " One Hundred Days of Loneliness" on about the experience lived by a man who aimed to be stay alone in a forest for three months. He filmed it using a drone as well as several cameras, including small ones handed with sticks for selfies. As he said in a certain moment at a certain point in the movie, he was inspired by "Walden" the famous Thoureau's book, which is a kind of Bible for people who think that human beings need to rebuild his their relationship with Nature. I encourage you to see it, not only for the magnificient footages of the Natural Park of Redes, located at in Asturias (North Spain) but also for its message."Picture" for motion picture is uncommon. Film or movie is common. "Picture" usually refers to a photo or painting. Here's how I would write your essay in American English from the west coast:
There is a movie called "One Hundred Days of Loneliness" about the experiences of a man who wanted to stay alone in a forest for three months. He filmed it using a drone as well as with several small cameras, held on selfie-sticks. As he said at one point in the movie, he was inspired by "Walden", the famous book by Thoreau, which is a kind of Bible for people who think human beings need to rebuild their relationship with nature. I encourage you to see it, not only for the magnificent footage of the Natural Park of Redes, located in Asturias (northern Spain), but also for its message.
Those are subtle changes I made. Hope it helps. Your English is much better than my Spanish!
Gary
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Living Alone during One Hundred Days
There is a picture film (or movie) named (more natural: called) " One Hundred Days of Loneliness" on the experience lived by a man who aimed to be staying stay alone in a forest for three months. He filmed it using a drone as well as several cameras, including small ones handled with sticks for selfies (more natural: small ones on selfie sticks). As he said in at a certain moment in the movie (or at one point in the movie), he was inspired by "Walden" the famous Thoureau's book (or Thoureau's famous book), which is a kind of Bible for people who think that human beings need to rebuild his their relationship with nature (or that the human being needs to rebuild his relationship with nature). I encourage you to see it, not only for the magnificient footages of the Natural Park of Redes, located at in Asturias (North Spain) but also for its message.Very good Angel. As always, corrections in red and suggestions to sound more natural in blue and grey.
Note: The plural of "footage" is also "footage", without an "s". It's generally considered an uncountable noun.
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