I made bread.
One day, I decided to make bread, because I didn't satisfied with bread which is sold in my neighborhood.
A while ago, I have eaten foreign bread frozen which is made from water, salt, sugar, bread flour, and yeast.
The bread was tasty.
Therefore, I decided to make from same ingredients.
I tried adding rye flour as well, and scoring bread though I'm not sure if that have a meaning.
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I made it!
It was better than I had thought.Yeah!
However, It took more time than I had thought...
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I made bread.
One day I decided to make bread because I felt unsatisfied with the bread sold in my neighborhood.A while ago, I had eaten foreign bread frozen, made from water, salt, sugar, bread flour, and yeast.
The bread was tasty.
Therefore, I decided to make mine from the same ingredients.
I tried adding rye flour as well, and scoring the bread though I'm not sure if that has a meaning.
................
I made it!
It was better than I had thought. Yeah!
However, It took more time than I had thought...
Very well written and baked!
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