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Hot Hot Hot I always run after 6 PM this season, because it's very hot in a daytime and I also don't want to get a tan. Especially this year is very hot, you may die if you take an exercise under the sun. Also, it's still hot in an evening but a sunlight is almost gone and I feel a good breeze and I can see a very beautiful sunset. The weather forecast says that it'll rain this weekend, so I'm going to run today and Friday.

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Hot Hot Hot

I always run after 6 *p.m. in summer this season, because it's very hot in (1) the daytime and I also don't want to get a tan.

Especially This year is a very hot year, so you may die if you take an exercise while being directly exposed to under the sun.

Also, Although it's still hot in an (1) the evening, but a sunlight is almost gone (2) the sun is setting.  I can feel a good cool breeze and I can see a very beautiful sunset.

The weather forecast says that it'll rain this weekend, so I'm going to run today and (3) on Friday.

Hi Shino, 

I read a news article about the extreme heat wave affecting Japan, Korea and Europe this summer, and got to know that some parts of Japan are sizzling under temperatures as high as 41 degree Celsius! I hope that things will get better quickly!

As for your writing, I would like to offer some suggestions: 

* We use p.m. (small letters) as an abbreviation for "post meridiem", meaning past midday.

(1) We use the definite article "the" when describing parts of the day (e.g. in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening)

I usually wake up very early in the morning to catch the first bus to work. In the afternoon, I find some time to run some errands during my lunch break. By the time I reach home in the evening, I am literally spent. 

(2) By dusk, the sun sets by gradually falling below the horizon, and the sunlight fades.

(3) We use the preposition "on" for days of the week or a date.

Example: I take a break on Sundays. / A crime was reported in the neighbourhood on 20th July 2018. 

I hope this helps. 

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Hot Hot Hot

I always run after 6 PM this season because it's very hot in the daytime and I also don't want to get a tan.

This year, especially, is very hot. You can die if you exercise directly under the sun.

Also, it's still hot in the evening but the sunlight is almost gone and I feel a good breeze and I can see a very beautiful sunset.

The weather forecast says that it'll rain this weekend, so I'm going to run today and Friday.

Very well written!

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Thank you for the comments. I can't have an exercise in every time(;´Д｀) Also, running in the morning is difficult for me! but I'll try it, thank you(・∀・)
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You should try to run in the morning if you can. I like running but just in the morning, i wake up more rested
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i exersice in every time [emoji]

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