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Back to school Recently, I began to think what the period of my life I would be change. I think that I don’t wish change anything in my life, because each event, each happiness and unfortune have influenced on my character and the point of life where I am now. But If I think about my time in the school I want to change a lot of things. I understand that I miss a huge free time, which I could spent on my education. This time was excellent for remembering, I could improve my knowledge in the difference directions and learn the great quantity of information. I can’t tell which school subject I would prefer for the deep learning, because I wish to know all of them well in that day. But I am very thankfull for my mother that she accustomed me to read constantly. I remember she was requesting to me to write essays about my reading book during two summers when I was 9-10 years old. After that, I shoul have hated it, but opposite I liked the reading and writing. We didn’t have the Internet at that time and I was been passing all the my free time with the books. I have been going to the school library every week and choosen books very carefully. I liked fantasy, detective and historical books.

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Back to school

Recently, I began to think about which period of my life I would want to change. I don't think that I don’t wish to change anything in my life, because each event, each joy [1] and misfortune have influenced on my character and the point of life where I am in life now.
But if I think about my time in the school I want to change a lot of things. I understand that I miss having a lot of free time to spend on my education. This time was excellent for remembering [4], and I could improve my knowledge in the different directions and learn a great quantity of information.

I can’t tell which school subject I would prefer to study deeply [2], because I wish to know all of them well some day.

But I am very thankful for my mother because [3] she taught me to read constantly. I remember she asked me to write essays about the books I was reading during two summers when I was 9-10 years old. After that, I should have hated it, but instead I liked the reading and writing. We didn’t have the Internet at that time and I passed all of my free time with the books. I went to the school library every week and chose books very carefully. I liked fantasy, detective and historical books.

[1] "Happiness" can be used here, but I think "joy" is a bit more colloquial.

[2] I think "study" works a bit better here for the same reason as above.

[3] You could either say "I am thankful that my mother taught me to read constantly" or "I am thankful for my mother because she taught me to read constantly."

[4] "Studying" may be a better word to use here.

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Back to school

Recently I began to wonder what time in my life I would wish to change. I thought that I don’t wish to change anything in my life, because each event, each happiness and misfortune has influenced my character and the point of life where I am now.
But if I think about my time in school I want to change a lot of things. I know that I missed much free time, which I could have spent on my education. This time was excellent for remembering, I could improve my knowledge in different directions and learn a great deal of information.

I can’t tell which school subject I would have preferred to learn thoroughly, because I wanted to know all of them well at that time.*

But I am very thankful to my mother for having accustomed me to read constantly. I remember her asking me to write essays about my reading book during two summers when I was 9-10 years old. After that, I should have hated it, but I didn't; I liked reading and writing. We didn’t have the internet at that time and I was passing all my free time with books. I was going to the school library every week and chosing books very carefully. I liked fantasy, detective and historical books.

*I assume that you talk now about the past.

very well written!

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