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Working at a bank. Here is a short overview of my tasks: - Ensured a high level of customer satisfaction by responding to various customer inquiries face to face, over the phone or via correspondence - Created a friendly rapport with customers through the use of effective communication skills - Gained a comprehensive understanding of banking procedures by assisting colleagues with loan applications and other tasks - Opened new bank accounts for companies as well as self-employed workers - Informed bank customers on financial products offered by Commerzbank - Verified customer data to detect and identify financial fraud Thx for correction in advance!

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Working at a bank.

Here is a short overview of my tasks:

- Ensured Ensure a high level of customer satisfaction by responding to various customer inquiries face to face, over the phone or via correspondence
- Created Create a friendly rapport with customers through the use of effective communication skills
- Gained Gain a comprehensive understanding of banking procedures by assisting colleagues with loan applications and other tasks
- Opened  Open new bank accounts for companies as well as self-employed workers
- Informed  Gain bank customers on financial products offered by Commerzbank
- Verified Verify customer data to detect and identify financial fraud

Thx for correction in advance!

Gut gemacht, Pascal!  Ich bin kein Grammatikexperte, aber es ist besser, Präsens zu verwenden, wenn Sie Ihre aktuellen Jobaufgaben beschreiben. Sie würden die Vergangenheitsform nur dann verwenden, wenn Sie nicht mehr bei dieser Firma arbeiten und die Arbeit beschreiben, die Sie früher gemacht haben. Entschuldige meine schlechte deutsche Grammatik. Ich bin ein Anfänger auf Deutsch.

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Working at a bank.

Here is a short overview of my tasks:

- Ensured a high level of customer satisfaction by responding to various customer inquiries face to face, over the phone, or via correspondence
- Created a friendly rapport with customers through the use of effective communication skills
- Gained a comprehensive understanding of banking procedures by assisting colleagues with loan applications and other tasks
- Opened new bank accounts for companies as well as self-employed workers
- Informed bank customers on about financial products offered by Commerzbank
- Verified customer data to detect and identify financial fraud

Thx for correction in advance!

[Really good, Pascal. The Oxford comma in the first sentence is largely a matter of taste, though I think it makes the list clearer. The only grammatical error that I see is the use of 'on' in the penultimate sentence.]

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