JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?
JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
Nowadays, it has been continued strange weather here. Possibly you've already known, to watch the broadcast or do the internet, yes we all Japanese have spend long days in such high temperature. I'll tell you in advance, I love summer season and spend days in high temperature, but this season is so strange. Putting my feeling just now into simple word, I'm so sick. You know, I don't want to go out as it's so hot outside and we could spend days if we turn on the air conditioner when we feel hot or humid. Once tuning it on, I would forget that It's summer just now. By the way, I am just wondering if tourists who have came her form other countries hate this summer season in Japan. If I were them, I would become hate to live in Japan here. Definitely.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
Nowadays, it there has been continued continuously strange weather here. Possibly It's possible you've already known, to watch the broadcast or do the internet by watching broadcasts or using the internet. Yes, we all all us Japanese spend/have spent long days in such high temperatures. I'll tell you in advance, I love the summer season and spending days in high temperatures, but this season is so strange. Putting my feeling just now into simple words, I'm so sick. You know, I don't want to go out as it's so hot outside and we could spend days inside(?) if we turn on the air conditioner when we feel hot or humid. Once it's turned on/After turning it on, I would forget that it's summer just now. By the way, I am just wondering if tourists who have came here form other countries hate this summer season in Japan. If I were them, I would become hate to live come to hate living here in Japan here. Definitely.
This part "we could spend days if we turn on the air conditioner when we feel hot or humid." isn't clear, but I think you meant spending days inside.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
Nowadays, strange weather has been continuing here. Possibly you've already known, from watching a broadcast or on the internet, yes we all Japanese have spent long days in such high temperatures. I'll tell you in advance, I love the summer season and spending days in high temperatures, but this season is so strange. Putting my feelings just now into simple words, I'm so sick. You know, I don't want to go out as it's so hot outside and (because?)* we could spend our days (inside?)* if we turn on the air conditioner when we feel hot or humid. Once turning it on, I would forget that It's summer just now. By the way, I am just wondering if tourists who have came here from other countries would hate this summer season in Japan. If I were them, I would become hate to live in Japan here. Definitely.
* This part I'm unsure of what you are trying to say exactly.
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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Jul.23rd
Nowadays, there has been continuous strange weather here. You may have already known, if you watch broadcasts or go on the internet, yes we all Japanese have spent long days in such high temperatures. I'll tell you in advance, I love summer season and spending days in high temperatures, but this season is so strange. Putting my feelings just now into simple words, I'm so sick. You know, I don't want to go out as it's so hot outside and we could spend days if we turn on the air conditioner when we feel hot or humid. Once tuning it on, I would forget that It's summer just now. By the way, I am just wondering if tourists who have came here from other countries hate this summer season in Japan. If I were them, I would become hate to live in Japan here. Definitely.
Good job! Keep up the hard work. Summer heat is brutal this year, make sure to drink lots of water!
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Nowadays, there has been continuously strange weather here. You may have already known, from watching a broadcast or on the internet, yes we all Japanese have spent long days in such high temperature. I'll tell you in advance, I love the summer season and spending days in high temperatures, but this season is so strange. Putting my feeling just now into simple words, I'm so sick. You know, I don't want to go out as it's shot outside and we could spend days if we turn on the air conditioner when we feel hit or humid. Once it's turned on/After turning it on. I would forget that it's summer just now. By the way, I am just wondering if tourists who have came here from other countries hate this summer season in Japan. If I were them, I would come to hate living here in Japan. Definitely.
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