Personal Possession
One of my favourite possessions is a golden ring that has my name engraved.
When I was a baby my parents gave a golden bracelet which had my name engraved. I grow up and the bracelet didn't fit anymore. So, when I turned fifteen my parents asked the jeweler to melt the bracelet and make a ring.
I use it almost every day and the ring reminds me of my parents because we don't live in the same city and we don't see each other frequently.
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Personal Possession
One of my favourite possessions is a golden ring that has my name engraved.When I was a baby my parents gave me a golden bracelet which had my name engraved. Once I grew up the bracelet didn't fit anymore. So, when I turned fifteen my parents asked the jeweler to melt the bracelet and make a ring.
I wear it almost every day and the ring reminds me of my parents because we don't live in the same city and we don't see each other very often. >"Frequently" is correct, but "very often" sounds more natural. Just a suggestion :)
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