Mari and her friends.

Mari told them that their English was difficult to understand because they didn't weren't pronouncing  the T sound in words.[ full stop]  which This made them mad. They and so they stopped talking to Mari. She realized that she shouldn't criticize people's way of talking. Going to their room, she apologized to them. Then, they started to talk each other again.

Mari asked them what they knew about Japan. They said as follows told her that they knew girls in Hong-Kong that liked Japanese songs, fashion and TV program. They had favorite singers and actors. Similarly, the boys also had favorite singers and actresses. They'd like to and talked about buying a Japanese car one day. Mari was happy to make friends who liked Japan.

Then, Mari made friends with 3 men. Mari asked them what they thought of Japan. They considered Japan to be a developed country with high advanced  technologies. They'd spoke about wanting  to buy some Japanese products but said it was they were very expensive and hard to come by in their country, so one day they had a dream to go to Japan to buy them there. They thought Mari was neatly dressed and surprised how organized her room was.

Well written Hisako. Just a few mistakes and suggestion, but generally I understood everything that you were trying to say, so the communication was a success.

Hope that helps.

Kind regards

Ryder

Mari told them that their English was difficult to understand because they didn't pronounce the T sound, which made them mad. They stopped talking to Mari. She realized that she shouldn't criticize people's way of talking. She went to their room and apologized to them. Then, they started talking to each other again. Mari asked them what they knew about Japan. They said as follows. Girls in Hong-Kong liked Japanese songs, fashion and TV program. They had favorite singers and actors. Similary, boys had favorite singers and actresses. They'd like to buy a Japanese car one day. Mari was happy to make friends with people who liked Japan. Mari made friends with the 3 men. Mari asked them what they thought of Japan. They considered Japan to be a developed country with advanced technology. They'd like to buy some Japanese products, but they were expensive and hard to come by in their country, so they dreamed of going to Japan and buying them. They thought Mari was neatly dressed and were surprised at how organized her room was.