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Could you give me an advice? I have been pondering on my future. I have just finished my high school final tests and the results are better than what I expected them to be. Nevertheless, the questions don't stop coming to my mind. Is it a good idea to go to another island (I live in Canary Islands) in order to study what I want (English philology)?

Because of the fact that I don't have the enough money to afford it, I've been considering asking for a loan, that would solve all my problems, but... Will I got a job before the no paying five years end? Will I be able to face that situation?

On the other hand, I'm thinking about inscribing me on the Oficial School of Languages on the island I want to study the career. Is it too much learning german and french with the English philology grade at the same time?

Please, give me your opinion with the correction ( always welcome ) below.

Love,

Joel Guerra

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The orange highlights are words or phrases that should be deleted. The yellow highlights should be added.  The word "what" in "are better than what..." could stay, but the writing is smoother without it. 

We would usually say, "Will you give me advice?" but either is correct.

We always (in America, I'm not sure about other English-speaking countries on this one) say, "the Canary Islands."

"... money enough ..." is technically correct, but not in common usage.  We usually switch them.

A time of not paying on a loan is called a grace period.

A grade is given to evaluate performance. A plan of study offered by a tertiary institution (high school is secondary) is usually called a course or a program.


Could you give me an advice?

I have been pondering on my future. I have just finished my high school final tests and the results are better than [what] I expected them to be. Nevertheless, the questions don't stop coming to my mind. Is it a good idea to go to another island (I live in the Canary Islands) in order to study what I want (English philology)?

Because of the fact that I don't have the enough money enough to afford it, I've been considering asking for a loan. That would solve all my problems, but... Will I get a job before the no paying five-years grace period ends? Will I be able to face that situation?

On the other hand, I'm thinking about inscribing me on attending the Official School of Languages on the island where I want to study for my future the career. Is it too much learning German and French along with the English philology grade course [or program] at the same time?

Please, give me your opinion with the correction ( always welcome ) below.

Love,

Joel Guerra

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Joel, I've been thinking about your basic question: should you take out a loan or not. To answer that you have to consider what actual jobs would be open to you with those qualifications. Ask yourself how much money you CAN make and how much money you are LIKELY to make, which are two different things. Calculate how long it would take you to repay the loan based on how much money you are LIKELY to make. If a loan for educational purposes can be easily repaid with the new qualifications, then it is worthwhile to take out the loan. If the anticipated income will not make repayment easy, do not take out the loan. The borrower is a slave to the lender. Best wishes!

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