Would you have a quick look my cover letter please? Does it sound natural and professional? Thankss
Dear J....,
Thank you for your time last Friday, It is exciting that the project is progressing.
Please find attached my Cv and bellow my statement to apply for the position Community Organiser:
Since 2012, my background has been characterised by my dedication to contribute in charities that aims to help residents the borough of Southwark.
Currently, I spend time with families to resolve issues in different fields such as, Housing, Welfare and NHS. It has involved performing a variety of office roles and interpret for Spanish speakers residents whether attending authorities offices, Gp or Hospitals to follow treatments.
In my last job as Action Researcher for the Childhood Obesity project. I gained extensive experience dealing with parents and I enjoyed developing relationships with community leaders in order to organised venues for the listening groups.
In 2014, my role as Information and Support advisor consist in being the first contact for resident who wanted to do volunteering work. This job requires input in database, searching opportunities, making calls to arrange interviews and monitor volunteers to help them with the progress.
In addition, I took a Kitchen Assistant training course (equivalent from Spain) that qualified me to work in restaurants and hotels. The course includes Health and Safety in the workplace and Food Management in a professional setting. When I arrived to UK in 2008, I worked in a Burger King for two years, where I started in the kitchen until I learnt the language to be promoted in the company. Besides, I worked in a Peruvian restaurant during the week ends.
I feel confident speaking both languages that I could bring my abilities to facilitate the work with different cultures and backgrounds. I believe that I can actively contribute with families because I usually be described as easy going person able to adapt in all sort of groups.
I would describe myself tolerant, patience, dedicated, kind and at the same time, proactive. I am passionate with community organising tasks related with healthy style and I consider that, this position would bring me a huge opportunity to progress and achieve my next goals.
Thank you for your consideration.
I look forward to meeting with you to discuss my application further.
Yours sincerely,
......
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Hi Jasmina, I've made some minor edits, but otherwise very good. Good luck!
Dear J....,Thank you for your time last Friday, It is exciting that the project is progressing.
Please find attached my CV and below my statement to apply for the position of Community Organiser:
Since 2012, my background has been characterised by my dedication to contribute in charities that aim to help residents in the borough of Southwark.
Currently, I spend time with families to resolve issues in different fields such as, Housing, Welfare and NHS. It has involved performing a variety of office roles and interpret for Spanish speaking residents, whether attending authorities offices, the GP or Hospitals to follow treatments.
In my last job as Action Researcher for the Childhood Obesity project, I gained extensive experience dealing with parents and I enjoyed developing relationships with community leaders in order to organise venues for the listening groups.
In 2014, my role as Information and Support adviser consisted of being the first contact for residents who wanted to do volunteering work. This job required database input, searching for opportunities, making calls to arrange interviews and monitoring volunteers to help them with their progress.
In addition, I took a Kitchen Assistant training course (equivalent from Spain) that qualified me to work in restaurants and hotels. The course included Health and Safety in the workplace and Food Management in a professional setting. When I arrived to in the UK in 2008, I worked in a Burger King for two years, where I started in the kitchen whilst learning English before gaining promotion within the company. Alongside this, I worked in a Peruvian restaurant during the weekends.
I am confident speaking both languages English and Spanish, which allows me to facilitate working with different cultures and backgrounds. I believe that I can actively contribute with families because I am usually described as an easy going person, who is able to assimilate with a wide range of people.
I would describe myself as tolerant, patient, dedicated, kind and at the same time, proactive. I am passionate within the community, organising tasks related to healthy living and I consider that this position would bring me a huge opportunity to progress and achieve my next goals.
Thank you for your consideration.
I look forward to meeting with you to discuss my application further.
Yours sincerely,
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Would you have a quick look my cover letter please? Does it sound natural and professional? Thankss
Dear J....,Thank you for your time last Friday. It is exciting (to hear?) that the project is progressing.
Please find attached my CV and below my statement to apply for the position of Community Organiser.
Since 2012, my background has been characterised by my dedication to contribute to those charities who aim to help the residents of the borough of Southwark.
Currently, I spend time with families to resolve issues in different areas such as, Housing, Welfare and the NHS. This involves performing a variety of office roles and interpreting for Spanish speaking residents whether attending authorities offices, their GP or hospitals to follow treatments.
In my last job as Action Researcher for the Childhood Obesity Project, I gained extensive experience dealing with parents and I enjoyed developing relationships with community leaders organising venues for the listening groups.
In 2014, my role as Information and Support Advisor consisted in being the first point of contact for residents who wished to do voluntary work. This job required inputting data in databases, searching opportunities, making calls to arrange interviews and monitoring volunteers to help them with their progress.
In addition, I took a Kitchen Assistant training course (Spanish equivalent) that qualifies me to work in restaurants and hotels. The course includes Health and Safety in the Workplace, and Food Management in a professional setting. When I arrived in the UK in 2008, I worked in a Burger King for two years, where I started in the kitchen until I learnt the language sufficently well to be promoted in the company. Also, I worked in a Peruvian restaurant during the weekends.
I feel confident speaking both English and Spanish and that I could bring my abilities to facilitate work between different cultures and backgrounds. I believe that I can actively contribute with families because I am normally described as an easy going person able to adapt in all sort of groups.
I would describe myself as tolerant, patient, dedicated, kind and at the same time, proactive. I am passionate with community organising tasks related to a healthy lifestyle and I consider that this position would bring me a huge opportunity to progress and achieve my next goals.
Thank you for your consideration.
I look forward to meeting with you to discuss my application further.
Yours sincerely,
......
very well written! You are hired, not fired!
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Would you have a quick look my cover letter please? Does it sound natural and professional? Thanks
Dear J....,Thank you for your time last Friday, It is exciting that the project is progressing.
Please find attached my CV and below my statement to apply for the position of Community Organiser:
Since 2012, my background has been characterised by my dedication to contribute in charities that aims to help residents of the borough of Southwark.
Currently, I spend time with families to resolve issues in different fields such as housing, welfare and NHS. It has involved performing a variety of office roles and interpret for Spanish speaking residents whether attending to authorities offices, G.P. or hospitals to follow treatments.
In my last job as Action Researcher for the Childhood Obesity project, I gained extensive experience dealing with parents and I enjoyed developing relationships with community leaders in order to organised venues for the listening groups.
In 2014, my role as Information and Support adviser consisted in being the first contact for residents who wanted to do volunteering work. This job requires input in database, searching opportunities, making calls to arrange interviews and monitoring volunteers to help them with the progress.
In addition, I took a Kitchen Assistant training course (equivalent from Spain) that qualified me to work in restaurants and hotels. The course includes Health and Safety in the workplace and Food Management in a professional setting. When I arrived in the UK in 2008, I worked in a Burger King for two years, where I started in the kitchen until I learnt the language to be promoted in the company. Besides, I worked in a Peruvian restaurant during the week ends.
I feel confident speaking both languages that I could bring my abilities to facilitate the work with different cultures and backgrounds. I believe that I can actively contribute with families because I usually can be described as an easy going person able to adapt in all sort of groups.
I would describe myself tolerant, patience, dedicated, kind and at the same time, proactive. I am passionate with community organising tasks related with a healthy style and I consider that, this position would bring me a huge opportunity to progress and achieve my next goals.
Thank you for your consideration.
I look forward to meeting with you to discuss my application further.
Yours sincerely,
......
Very well write text with a few minor errors or words missing. Hope you get the job.
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