My Dream

Do you have dreams? What is the biggest dream of yours that you can think of?

Today I want to write about my dream.

I like to shoot short videos with my phone. After that, I add music to the video and a clip is created!

I dream about having my own filming studio by the age of 30. My studio would be in NY! I want to improve my filming skills very quickly and become famous in the world of videos. After all , I'd like to become a person who comes up with interesting and original scripts for videos. I want the famous singers to ask me to shoot videos for them.

My dream may seem funny, but I think it's better to have such a crazy dream, than not to have any dreams at all. :)

I think that it is very important to have a dream. Do you have one? What is it about?

Thank you for reading and correcting this text!

My Dream!

Have you a dreams? Do you have dreams?  What is a the biggest dream of you can imagine?

Today, I want to write about my dream!

First of all, I'd like to say a little introduction!

I'm I'd like to shoot a short video with my phone. After that, I add a music on a video and clip is created add music, and the clip is created!

I'm I dream about my own filming studio by 30 age age 30. My studio will be in NY! I want to improve my filming skills very quickly and stay be a famous person in the world of videoclips!))) After all , I'd like to stay be a person who can to imagine an interesting and original script for clip. I'm I want that famous singers searching me themselves for for talking to talk about filming a clip!

My dream may seems so seem  funny, but I think that it's better to  have such crazy dreams that than not have any dreams, or boring dreams. :)

I think that it's very important to have an any dreams! Do you have a dream? Which is one What is it?

Thank you for reading ans and fixing this text!

My Dream!

Do you have dreams? What is the biggest dream of you can imagine?

Today I want to write about my dream!

First of all, I'd like to give a little introduction!

I like shooting a short video with my phone. After that I add a music to the video and a clip is created!

I'm dream about having my own filming studio by the age of 30. My studio will be in NY! I want to improve my filming skills very quickly and become a famous person in the world of video clips!))) After all , I'd like to become a person who can to imagine (better: 'write') an interesting and original script for a clip. I'm want that famous singers to look for me and ask me to film a clip for them!

My dream may seems so funny, but I think it is better to have such a crazy dream than not to have any dreams or boring dreams :)

I think that it is very important to have a dream! Do you have a dream? Tell me about one.

Thank you for reading and fixing this text!

My Dream!

Have you a Do you have dreams? What is a the biggest dream of that you can imagine?

Today I want to write about my dream!

First of all, I'd like to say a little introduction!

I 'm like to shoot a short videos with my phone. After that, I add a music on  to the a video, and clip is created!

I 'm dream about my own filming studio by age 30 age. My studio will be in NY! I want to improve my filming skills very quickly and stay  become a famous person in the world of videoclips!))) After all , I'd like to stay  be (or become) a person who can to imagine an interisting and original script for clip. I 'm want that famous singers searching for me themselfves for for to talking about filming a clip!

My dream may seems so funny, but I think that better have such crazy dream that  than not have any dream or boring dream :)

I think that it's very important have an any dream! Do you have a dream? Which is one?

Thank you for reading ands fixing this text!

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Hi Dmitry!

First off, I love your dream. I have respect for anyone in the filming industry: I only found out how hard work that is when I went to make my Italki introduction video!

As for your text, you seem to be having trouble using the present progressive tense, which signifies that something is currently happening, right now.This is formed using the verb to be + the present participle (-ing). If you are not using the present progressive tense, then you can leave off the verb to be. (I'm [I am] dreaming --> I dream).

Articles also seem to be a point of confusion, which is understandable considering Russian has none. Definite articles (the) are only for things that there is only one of, or one specific thing out of many. Indefinate articles (a/an) stand for any one thing out of many.

I hope you're having a great day!

Nathan Seymour

Have you [a] have any dreams?   What is [a] the biggest dream of you can imagine? ( mixing singular and plural)

Hope that helps

Kind regards

R