Do you think the problem with the pollution can be solved?
In the modern world the vast majority of people has changed their mind to be more responsible about the environment because of the climate changed has started.
In the first hand, if we used less our private transport such as car or motorbike the pollution could be reduced. We have good prices and hours in our public transport and I think we’re getting used to use it.
On the second hand, another idea would be to think about the rivers and seas, there are a lot of rubbish on them. People should be fined when throw whatever into the water.
Last but not least, it’s well to think about the recycling and the good effects of that. It’s really important to learn how to do it and to increase the use of eco-friendly products and biodegradable bags and not so many plastic bags.
To sum up, in my opinion we have to take care of our planet and be aware of it.
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In the modern world the vast majority of people has have changed their mind to be more responsible about the environment because of the climate changed change has started.
***"People" is plural, so "have" is used, not has. (Has is used for singular)
"Climate Change" is a name, so it is treated like a proper noun. It is not conjugated and does not need articles.***
In the first hand To begin, if we used less our private transport such as cars or motorbikes less, the pollution could be reduced. We have good prices and hours in for our public transport and I think we’re getting used to use using it.
On the second hand Additionally, another idea would be to think about the rivers and seas; there are is a lot of rubbish on in them. People should be fined when throw whatever (either "...they throw whatever..." or "...throwing whatever...") into the water.
*** the phrase "on one hand.... on the other hand" is normally used to describe two opposing viewpoints (for example, "one one hand, I really want dessert, but, on the other hand, I'm on a diet"). Because you are giving multiple examples and not opposing viewpoints, a different phrase works better.***
Last but not least, it’swell beneficial to think about the recycling and the good effects of that. It’s really important to learn how to do it and to increase the use of eco-friendly products and biodegradable bags and not use so many plastic bags.
*** "well" is an adverb, meaning it describes a verb. However, in this sentence, gramatically the word you are describing is "it" ("it's" = "it is"), which is a noun - not a verb. So an adjective must be used.***
To sum up, in my opinion we have to take care of our planet and be aware of it.
Good work! Very easy to understand. The only errors are small technical ones, but it is not difficult to know what you are trying to communicate. Great job!
***"People" is plural, so "have" is used, not has. (Has is used for singular)
"Climate Change" is a name, so it is treated like a proper noun. It is not conjugated and does not need articles.***
*** the phrase "on one hand.... on the other hand" is normally used to describe two opposing viewpoints (for example, "one one hand, I really want dessert, but, on the other hand, I'm on a diet"). Because you are giving multiple examples and not opposing viewpoints, a different phrase works better.***
Last but not least, it’s
*** "well" is an adverb, meaning it describes a verb. However, in this sentence, gramatically the word you are describing is "it" ("it's" = "it is"), which is a noun - not a verb. So an adjective must be used.***
To sum up, in my opinion we have to take care of our planet and be aware of it.
Good work! Very easy to understand. The only errors are small technical ones, but it is not difficult to know what you are trying to communicate. Great job!
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Do you think the problem with the pollution can be solved?
In the modern world the vast majority of people have changed their minds to become more responsible about the environment because of the climate change.In the first hand, if we used our private transport such as cars or motorbikes less the pollution could be reduced. Our public transport is inexpensive and available all day and I think we’re getting used to use it.
On the second hand, another idea would be to think about the rivers and seas, there is a lot of rubbish in them. People should be fined when they throw whatever into the water.
Last but not least, it’s good to think about recycling and the positive effects of that. It’s really important to learn how to do it and to increase the use of eco-friendly products and biodegradable bags and to use less plastic bags.
To sum up, in my opinion we have to take care of our planet and be aware of it.
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