My holidays in London
I need to get away! Next Summer I’m going to visit London. I can’t wait to set off to the airport! My mother will pick me up at 5am and we’ll go to the airport with her car. I could get a taxi, but my mother wants to see me off at the airport, she is wonderful!
I’m so eager! However, I’m a little worried because several companies, which give services to airline companies in the airport, are going to suffer a strike in peak season. I’m afraid that my take-off could have a delay. My airline is a low-cost company, so my flight is very cheap. Sadly, it’s not a direct flight, I will have to stop over in Paris. However, if there aren’t clouds or fog, I will be able to see Paris from the sky!
Anyway, I hope to arrive at London in time for getting the tube. I have booked an apartment in the centre of the city. I’m going to stay there for a week. There are several must-see-places that I want to visit. Besides, the trip will be a chance to taste the British cuisine!
My holidays are coming!
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Hi Carles, Nice text. Try and avoid unnecessary repetition, like in the first paragraph where you use '...the airport' three time. You could substitute 'there' the second time ('...we'll go there in her car') and the final time just say '...my mother wants to see me off'. Readers will still understand that the place is the airport due to the context..
My holiday s in London
I need to get away! Next S summer I’m going to visit London. I can’t wait to set off to the airport! My mother will pick me up at 5am and we’ll go to the airport with in her car. I could get a taxi, but my mother wants to see me off at the airport, she is wonderful!I’m so eager! However, I’m a little worried because several companies which give provide services to the airline companies in the airport are going to suffer a strike in during peak season. I’m afraid that my take-off could have a be delayed. My airline is a low-cost company, so my flight is very cheap. Sadly, it’s not a direct flight, I will have to stop over in Paris. However, if there aren’t clouds or fog, I will be able to see Paris from the sky!
Anyway, I hope to arrive at in London in time for getting the tube. I have booked an apartment in the centre of the city. I’m going to stay there for a week. There are several must-see-places that I want to visit. Besides, the trip will be a chance to taste the British cuisine!
My holidays are coming!
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