How I'll spent my holiday...
I'm going to Calabria for 2 weeks with my girlfriend in a little town where you have a beautiful skyline with a sea view, then we are thinking to go to Sicily for 2 days with her parents, then we going back to Calabria and we will spend the rest of our days in relax. I never been in the western coast of Sicily, so I hope we will go in this side of region. I like south of Italy, for food, people and the sea.
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How I'll Spend my Holiday
I'm going to Calabria for 2 weeks with my girlfriend. We will be staying in a little town with a beautiful skyline and a sea view. After that, then we are thinking to go of going to Sicily for 2 days with her parents, then we're going back to Calabria and there, we will spend the rest of our days vacation in relaxing. I've never been in the western coast of Sicily, so I hope we will get to visit it. I like southern Italy because of the for food, people and the sea.
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How I'll spend my holiday...
I'm going to Calabria for 2 two* weeks with my girlfriend in a little town where you have a beautiful skyline with a sea view. Then we are thinking to about going to Sicily for 2 two days with her parents. After,** we are going back to Calabria and we will spend the rest of our days in relaxing {or: in relaxation}. I have never been in {better: to} the western coast of Sicily, so I hope we will go in to this side of region. I like the south of Italy, for its food, people, and the sea.*We write out numbers up to ten.
**The "...then...then...then..." structure creates a long run-on sentence and sounds repetitive. It's better to break these up into shorter sentences based on each activity/destination.
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