My hard day
Hey Max
Yesterday was a really nice. I woke up at 9 o'clock. Then I went to the bathroom to get ready. So at 11 o' clock I got a message from my best friend. He ask me if we want to go out and play football before our training starts. First I was not sure because I did not know who many will come cause he and I had gone often alone and it does not make really fun. After he had answered my question I really want to go because we were seven people so I knew that will be fun so I went to the football pitch. We met us at 3 o'clock. At the beginning we was six people because one of us had to something so he came later. Also to six it was really funny. We did many challanges. I did not won every challange but I did not lose every challange I was in the middle. Then our trainig started it was really funny. After the training I was quite done. When I came at my home I went to my bed and fall asleep.
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My hard day
Hey MaxYesterday was a really nice. I woke up at 9 o'clock, and then I went to the bathroom to get ready. So At 11 o' clock I got a message from my best friend. He asked me if we want I wanted to go out and play football before our training starts started. First I was not sure because I did not know who how many will would come cause he and I had gone often gone alone and it does not make it really fun. After he had answered my question, I really wanted to go because we there were seven people so I knew that will would be fun so I went to the football pitch. We met us at 3 o'clock. At the beginning we was there were six people because one of us had to do something so he came later. Also to with six it was really funny. We did many challenges. I did not win every challenge but I did not lose every challenge either. I was in the middle. Then our training started and it was really funny. After the training I was quite done exhausted. When I came at my got home, I went to my bed and fell asleep.
How was your day?
See you soon
That was a good story. When you tell a story, remember to use Past tenses. Also, when we talk about the number of a group of people, we say 'there were' .
Always check your spelling after you have finished writing.
Well done!
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My hard day
Hey MaxYesterday was a really nice. I woke up at 9 o'clock. Then I went to the bathroom to get ready. So at 11 o' clock I got a message from my best friend. He ask asked me if we want I wanted to go out and play football before our training starts started. First I was not sure because I did not know who how many will people would come cause because he and I had gone often often gone alone and it does not make which is not really fun. After he had answered my question I really want wanted to go because we were seven people there would be seven of us so I knew that will would be fun so I went to the football pitch. We met us at 3 o'clock. At the beginning we was six people there were six of us because one of us had to do something so he came later. Also to six it was really funny. It was fun with six of us. We did many challanges challenges. I did not won every challange challenge but I did not lose every challange challenge I was in the middle. Then our trainig training started it was really funny. After the training I was quite done wiped out. When I came at my home I went to my bed and fall fell asleep.
Hoe How was you your day?
See you soon
Hello! I hope my corrections are ok for you! I used 'wiped out' for 'done' but that's colloquial and you could use 'tired' to use more conventional language. Thanks, Sarah
Sorry, I just saw Julie had already corrected this! I must have been typing at the same time ...
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