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Rich or Poor Dad People hold differing views about whether a person with a humble birth is more likely to be successful or someone who comes from a well-off family has more chance to stand out. Personally, I tend to believe that the later possesses more opportunities to succeed if he or she slackens no efforts in trying, and I am going to give my reasons in the following discussions.

I do not deny the fact that there are many successful examples of people who are poorly raised but excel at some areas eventually with honest hard work and continuous endeavors. The contributing factors of those self-made successes are quite obvious: they have a burning desire to change their situations and more willing to strike for a better living with their own hands. In addition, those people are prone to be more mature, independent and tenacious, as they have already used to adversities and they know that they have no choice but to endeavor. Even if they face with failure continuously, they are not likely to feel frustrated and will not give up on their dreams.

On the other hand, people who come from well-off families have more chances to achieve success in a variety of professions. To begin with, they acquire better education and are raised in a better environment, where they can focus on pursuing their dreams without being troubled by humble pockets. They can fulfill their many dreams with financial or material support from their families, like travelling around the globe, studying overseas or even starting their own business. Meanwhile, those who are properly raised and educated are more likely to be extroverted, talkative and social, because they can not only learn from their parents who are already the society's elites, but also have better understanding of and more chance to practice leadership.

It is not right to define a person by their backgrounds, and the world is full of uncertainty, where anyone has chances to excel if they zero in on their dreams and slacken no efforts of trying.

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Rich or Poor Dad

People hold differing views about whether a person with a humble birth is more likely to be successful or someone who comes from a well-off family has more chance to stand out. Personally, I tend to believe that the later possesses more opportunities to succeed if he or she does not slacken**** in trying, and I am going to give my reasons in the following paragraphs*.

I do not deny the fact that there are many successful examples of people who are poorly raised but excel at some areas eventually with honest hard work and continuous endeavors. The contributing factors of those self-made successes are quite obvious: they have a burning desire to change their situations and are more willing to strive for a better living with their own hands. In addition, those people are prone to be more mature, independent and tenacious, as they are already used to adversities** and they know that they have no choice but to endeavor. Even if they are faced with failure continuously, they are not likely to feel frustrated and will not give up on their dreams.

On the other hand, people who come from well-off families have more chances to achieve success in a variety of professions. To begin with, they acquire better education and are raised in a better environment, where they can focus on pursuing their dreams without being troubled by humble pockets. They can fulfill their many dreams with financial or material support from their families, like travelling around the globe, studying overseas or even starting their own business. Meanwhile, those who are properly raised and educated are more likely to be extroverted, talkative and social, because they can not only learn from their parents who are already the society's elites, but also have a better understanding of and more chances to practice leadership.

It is not right to define a person by their background***, and the world is full of uncertainty, where anyone has chances to excel if they zero in on their dreams and waste no efforts**** trying.

[* Your entire article here is considered to be one discussion. If you were covering more than one topic, then you could say you had more than a single discussion.

** Or: "as they have already confronted adversities and ..."

*** Or: "to define people by their backgrounds".

**** The phrase "slacken no efforts" does not appear in the British or American word corpuses I have access to, so is not a valid phrase]

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