Humans and bees: a honey-moon
Even though, there are a lot of miths and legends about bees which, sometimes, make us to be afraid of these insects; our relationship with them is completely necessary. This is due to the fact that pollination of flowers have being made by these little and amazing insects.
Therefore, we must be careful if we don’t want to put in danger the life of bees. We must protect hives, use less pesticides in order not to interfere with the bees’ navigation system, and having less farms with just one crop. All of these solutions have to put in action quickly because our own survival is linked with bees. The more healthy hives, the better for humans.
Consequently, we should know more about these amazing friends: how colonies are, which relationship is between the queen and drones and workers, how a hive is inside.
Buy your own hive
This would be a great method to encourage yourself and other people to realise that bees are very useful animal. You just need a veil in order to protect yourself of their painful sting and the smoke to they think the need to evacuate the hive. That’s all.
This would be the beginning of a great friendship.
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Humans and bees: a honey-moon
Even though, there are a lot of miths (myths) and legends about bees which, sometimes, make us to be afraid of these insects, our relationship with them is completely necessary. This is due to the fact that pollination of flowers have being is made by these little and amazing insects. (this sentence is grammatically correct, but I think it would be better to put it in the active voice to give emphasis on the critical importance of bees in pollinating flowers)Therefore, we must be careful if we don’t want to put the life of bees in danger the life of bees. We must protect hives, use less pesticides in order not to interfere with the bees’ navigation system, and having have less farms with just one crop. All of these solutions have to be put in action quickly because our own survival is linked with bees. The more healthy the hives, the better for humans.
Consequently, we should know more about these amazing friends: how colonies are formed, which the relationship is between the queen and drones and workers and how a hive is functions inside.
Buy your own hive
This would be a great method to encourage yourself and other people to realise that bees are very useful animals. You just need a veil in order to protect yourself of from their painful sting and the smoke, to they think the need to evacuate the hive. That’s all.
This would be the beginning of a great friendship.
*Very interesting essay and well written. I completely agree with you about the myths and misconceptions people have about honey bees.
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