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writing practice - renting accommodation Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to consult rented accommodation issues in your country because my family and I have decided to move there and as a property agent you may have more knowledge on local renting market. I graduated from a university ten years ago and have been working as an accountant in a large firm. Recently I have got an opportunity to transfer to your country. My family will go along with me. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my little brother and I. The accommodation I am looking for is a big apartment, with three bedrooms, one living room, one kitchen, two bathrooms and one balcony. My new workplace is right in the downtown. I hope to find the accommodation within the downtown area or at least nearby. If you have other suggestion on the type of accommodation to meet my needs or you have many options of apartments to choose in the desired area, feel free to contact me. We can discuss the details later. Looking forward to your reply. Your faithfully, Richrd

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Writing Practice - Renting Accommodation (Title needs capital letter)

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to consult consult you about/discuss rented rental accommodation issues (not needed) in your country because my family and I have decided to move there and as a property agent you may have more will have (more polite) knowledge on of the local renting market.
I graduated from a university ten years ago and have been working as an accountant in a large firm. Recently I have got received (more formal) an opportunity to transfer to your country. My family will go along with me. There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my little brother and I.
The accommodation I am looking for is a big apartment, with three bedrooms, one living room, one kitchen, two bathrooms and one balcony.
My new workplace is right in the downtown. I hope to find the accommodation within the downtown area or at least nearby.
If you have other suggestions on the type of accommodation to meet my needs or you have many (more polite) apartment options to choose in the desired area, feel free to contact me and we can discuss the details. 
Looking forward to your reply.
Your faithfully,
Richard

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