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I'm not sure Hey. I’m lonely because my dear friend didn’t write to came to town. Of course, our relationship ended but we could just walk. I’d really waited this day since June. Now I’m listening to music which isn’t happy and thinking that I must forget this person. Although I have happy news. I’m going to go to Tunis and Saint Petersburg. So, I and my family can go to other countries such as Sweden, Estonia and Finland but I’m not sure we’re going because we have any problems with documents. I like to listen to Sam Smith’s songs. They’re so emotional and tragic. My favorite is “Too good at goodbye”. Now it’s raining outside, and his songs are playing in my playlist. We can imagine that I feel down all the time, of course not. I’m very funny and happy girl but sometimes everyone can feel down.

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I'm not sure

Hey. I’m lonely because my dear friend didn’t write to came to town. Of course, our relationship ended but we could just walk. I’d really waited for this day since June. Now I’m listening to music which isn’t happy, and thinking that I must forget this person. But* I have happy news. I’m going to go to Tunis and Saint Petersburg. So, I and my family ("my family and I" might flow better) can go to other countries such as Sweden, Estonia and Finland, but I’m not sure we’re going because we have many problems with our documents.

I like to listen to Sam Smith’s songs. They’re so emotional and tragic. My favorite is “Too good at goodbye”. Now it’s raining outside, and his songs are playing in my playlist. We can imagine that I feel down all the time, but of course I am not. (alt:" ... all the time: of course I'm not.")  I’m a very funny and happy girl, but sometimes everyone can feel down.

* http://www.writewithjean.com/usage-and-grammar/although/

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