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One trip Let me tell you about my trip. It  was one month ago. I travelled to Cajamarca by plane. I went to visit muy family. The travel was well but there was some problems.  First my fly was delayed, second the traffic in Cajamarca was terrible. I lost breakfast with my family. Another problem was the taxi. It was very expensive in Lima.  I had to pay  70 PEN. The first day my father and me saw Peru vs Dinamarca football match.we enjoyed it. The second day my family and me had a great Father's day. They was happy very happy. Finally, I travelled back go Lima. It hasn't got problems. It was quickly and some conmfortable. In my opinion, I enjoyed this trip. Regards. Please, can someone correct the text above. I await your comments. Thanks.

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One trip

Let me tell you about my trip. It  was one month ago. I travelled traveled to Cajamarca by plane. I went to visit muy my family.
The travel trip was well (good sounds more natural here) but there was were some problems.  First my fly flight was delayed, second, the traffic in Cajamarca was terrible. I lost didn't get to eat breakfast with my family. Another problem was the taxi. It was very expensive in Lima.  I had to pay  70 PEN. (? I don't know what this means). The first day my father and me I saw watched the Peru vs Dinamarca football match. We enjoyed it. The second day my family and me I had a great Father's day. They was were happy, very happy.
Finally, I travelled traveled back go  to Lima. It hasn't got There weren't any problems. It was quickly and somewhat conmfortable comfortable.
In my opinion, I enjoyed this trip.
Regards.

Please, can someone correct the text above.
I await your comments.
Thanks.

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