Beer beer
My friend told me that Every single day is an opportunity. Make the most out of it. Actuallty, I do not know how to make the most out of it......
In the day, between 9:00am-7:00pm I worked in my company, after I come back to my home, I do not want to do nothing just laied in my bed. I know it's wrong, but I feel tired if I need do other things after went off work. I'm so lazy, but I do not how to become hardworking like a beer. My friend told me, found something that you are like to do, such as dancing, painting, playing guitar...ect. There are lots of thing that you can learn or you need to learn. If you really want to improve yourself, you will have time and energy to do.
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Beer beer
My friend told me that every single day is an opportunity. Make the most out of it. Actuallty (actually), I do not know how to make the most out of it......In the day, between 9:00am-7:00pm I worked in my company, after I come back to my home, I do not want to do nothing anything (no double negatives) just laied lay in my bed. I know it's wrong, but I feel tired if I need do other things after went off work. I'm so lazy, but I do not how to become hardworking like a beer. My friend told me "found find (if it's a general thing, use present simple) something that you are like to do ( that you like to do, - I like to paint, I like cooking, I like to do things) , such as dancing, painting, playing guitar...ect etc ." (neec speech marks There are lots of things (plural) that you can learn or you need to learn. If you really want to improve yourself, you will have time and energy to do so. (the best way I can think to describe why we write 'so' here is as in the spanish 'asi' - this is why we do so, as such, this etc
Are beers hardworking? I don't understand that point...
Good effort though! :)
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Bee Bee
My friend told me that every single day is an opportunity. Make the most out of it. Actually, I do not know how to make the most out of it.
In the day, between 9:00am and 7:00pm, I work at my company. After I come back home, I do not want to do anything but lie in my bed. I know it's wrong, but I feel tired if I need do other things after work. I'm so lazy, but I do not how to become hardworking like a bee. My friend told me, "Find something that you like to do, such as dancing, painting, playing the guitar, etc. There are lots of things that you can or need to learn. If you really want to improve yourself, you will have time and energy to do so".
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Beer beer
My friend told me that every single day is an opportunity and that we should make the most out of it. Actually, I do not know how to make the most out of it......In During the day, between 9:00am and 7:00pm I worked in my company, after I come back to my home, I do not want to do nothing anything, just laied lie in my bed. I know it's wrong, but I feel too tired if I need to do anything else other things after went off work. I'm so lazy, but I do not how to become hardworking like a beer. My friend told me, to found find something that you are like to do, such as dancing, painting, playing guitar...ect etc. There are lots of things that you can learn or that you need to learn. If you really want to improve yourself, you will have make the time and energy to do so.
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