[emoji]
Corrections · 5
Not a bad start, but this is how I'd write it:
The climate all around the world has changed much since I was a child. The summers seem to be hotter and the winters colder than they were back then. I wonder whether or not these changes are real or imagined. I also wonder whether or not we could have predicted these climate changes.
(I changed "wather" to "climate" because "weather" is usually used to describe the conditions at a specific place and time, but "climate" refers to the average conditions expected at a certain place.
Also, the second sentence is confusing. In English we usually refer to things positively rather than negatively, thus, "now it's hotter" rather than "when I was a child the summer wasn't hotter than nowadays."
I think that perhaps instead of "sensation" you meant to use the word "imagination" because sensations (like touch, feel, taste, sight) are real.
The Wather Weather
[emoji]
The Weather
The weather its is changed around the world. I remembered when I was a child the summer wasn't hotter than nowadays, and in the same line, the winter wasn't colder than nowadays. I think I wonder whether is this a sensation or is real? And another question is: Could the change in the weather have been predicted?Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
