Go fishing
It's a sunny day ，today! Ｉwent to go fishing at a countryside in Beijing with Japanses customers 。This is the first time to go fishing so I was so excited 。at last ，I got one ，one of customers got two but ont of mine is bigger than two of theirs 。we had a great time 。
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Go fishing
It's a sunny day ，today! Ｉwent to go fishing at a countryside in Beijing with Japanses customers 。This is the first time to go fishing so I was so excited 。at last ，I got one ，one of customers got two but ont of mine is bigger than two of theirs 。we had a great time 。
its a sunny day and we went fishing at countryside in Beijing with Japanese clients. It was my first time and i was excited. I caught one one though one of our clients caught two. But mine was bigger even compared to the two that were caught. we really had great time.
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你的英文中时态不对，词汇可以再丰富一点
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Fishing
It was a sunny day .Ｉwent to fish at countryside in Beijing with Japanses customers . This was my first time to go fishing so I was quite excited . I finally caught a fish . One of the customers caught two but it looks smaller than mine. We had a great time today.
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Go fishing
It's a sunny day，today! Ｉwent to go fishing in the countryside around Beijing with some Japansese customers. This is the first time I had gone fishing so I was so excited. At last, I got one, one of customers got two, but one of mine was bigger than two of theirs. We had a great time.
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