About my family
There are five people in my family.
My family lives in Tochigi,but I live alone in Tokyo.
My family member are my father, my mother, an older brother, an younger brother ,and myself.
My father was a government worker. He is already ritired.
He is generous and polite.
My mother is a homemaker. She is adorable and warm hearted.
My older brother is a social insurance worker.
He is tanned and fit.
My younger brother works a security company.
He is passionate about fishing.
When I said I want to study abroad, my family all agree with me.
So I’m grateful to my family.
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About my family
There are five people in my family.My family lives in Tochigi, but I live alone in Tokyo.
My family members consist of my father, my mother, an older brother, a younger brother, and myself.
My father was a government worker. He is already ritired.
He is generous and polite.
My mother is a homemaker. She is adorable and warm hearted.
My older brother is a social insurance worker.
He is tanned and fit.
My younger brother works for a security company.
He is passionate about fishing.
When I said I wanted to study abroad, my family all agreed with me.
Therefore I’m grateful towards my family.
Hope this helps,
Regards,
Nicholas
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My Family
There are five people in my family.My family lives in Tochigi, but I live alone in Tokyo.
My family members include my father, my mother, an older brother, a younger brother , and myself.
My father was a government worker. He is now retiired.
He is generous and polite.
My mother is a homemaker. She is adorable and warm hearted.
My older brother is a social insurance worker.
He is tan and fit.
My younger brother works a security company. (If he "works a security company" that means he is the manager. If he "works AT a security compan"y he is employed there. So it could be correct depending on what you mean.)
He is passionate about fishing.
When I say I want to study abroad my family supports me.
So I’m grateful for my family.
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I admire you have a happy family.
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