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About my family There are five people in my family. My family lives in Tochigi,but I live alone in Tokyo. My family member are my father, my mother, an older brother, an younger brother ,and myself. My father was a government worker. He is already ritired. He is generous and polite. My mother is a homemaker. She is adorable and warm hearted. My older brother is a social insurance worker. He is tanned and fit. My younger brother works a security company. He is passionate about fishing. When I said I want to study abroad, my family all agree with me. So I’m grateful to my family.

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About my family

There are five people in my family.

My family lives in Tochigi, but I live alone in Tokyo.

My family members consist of my father, my mother, an older brother, a younger brother, and myself.

My father was a government worker. He is already ritired.

He is generous and polite.

My mother is a homemaker. She is adorable and warm hearted.

My older brother is a social insurance worker.

He is tanned and fit.

My younger brother works for a security company.

He is passionate about fishing.

When I said I wanted to study abroad, my family all agreed with me.

Therefore I’m grateful towards my family.


Hope this helps,

Regards,

Nicholas

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My Family

There are five people in my family.

My family lives in Tochigi, but I live alone in Tokyo.

My family members include my father, my mother, an older brother, a younger brother , and myself.

My father was a government worker. He is now retiired.

He is generous and polite.

My mother is a homemaker. She is adorable and warm hearted.

My older brother is a social insurance worker.

He is tan and fit.

My younger brother works a security company. (If he "works a security company" that means he is the manager. If he "works AT a security compan"y he is employed there. So it could be correct depending on what you mean.)

He is passionate about fishing.

When I say I want to study abroad my family supports me.

So I’m grateful for my family.
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I admire you have a happy family.

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