A Summer Experience.
Mr Ishiguro was shy but well-mannered young man. This interesting story is about his experience in his college days during one summer. He lived in Setagaya and worked part time in Shibuya in the summer. He had to wake up early in the morning and took a bus which is bound for Shibuya everyday. ( or can I say bus bounded for shibuya?)
He hated bus because it was uncomfortable due to the heat. A couple of days after he started to take the bus, he notice that same people took the same bus everyday. One of them was a young lady looking around 25 years old. She looked mature and sophisticated for 19 years old young man. He looked at the woman with a respect and longing. One or two weeks later, he came to look forward to taking the bus because of the beautiful lady. When he sat the same seat, she usually sat the opossitte side seat.
When she didn't face Mr. Ishiguro, he gazed at her. When she looked toward him, he looked away from her, pretending to look something else. Sometimes their eyes met. In that case, his heart was pounding and felt like it was about to stop. Several days later, there were sometime when seemed look at him in a friendly way.
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A Summer Experience.
Mr Ishiguro was shy but well-mannered young man. This interesting story is about his experience in his college days during one summer. He lived in Setagaya and worked part time in Shibuya in the summer. He had to wake up early in the morning and took a bus which is bound for Shibuya everyday. Shibuya bound bus every day.He hated that bus because it was uncomfortable due to the heat. A couple of days after he started to take it, he noticed that the same people took that bus every day. One of them was a young lady who looked around 25 years old. She looked too mature and sophisticated for a 19 year-old young man. He looked at the woman with a respect and longing. One or two weeks later After a couple weeks, he started to look forward to take that bus because of the beautiful lady. When he sat in the same seat, she usually sat the opossitte side seat. in the seat opposite to him.
When she didn't look in Mr. Ishiguro's direction, face Mr. Ishiguro, he gazed at her. When she looked toward him, he looked away from her, pretending to look at something else. There were some times (or you can use: There were moments) when Sometimes their eyes met. During those times/moments In that case, his heart was pounding and it felt like it was about to stop. Several days later, there were some times/moments when she seemed to look at him in a friendly way.
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Mr Ishiguro was a shy but well-mannered young man. This interesting story is about his experience in his college days during one summer. He lived in Setagaya and worked part time in Shibuya in the summer. He had to wake up early in the morning and take a bus bound for Shibuya everyday.
He hated the bus because it was uncomfortable due to the heat. A couple of days after he started to take the bus, he noticed that the same people took the same bus everyday. One of them was a young lady who looked around 25 years old. She looked too sophisticated for a 19 years old man. He looked at the woman with respect and longing and he came to look forward to taking the bus because of the beautiful lady. When he sat at the same seat, she usually sat on the opposite side.
When she didn't face Mr. Ishiguro, he gazed at her. When she looked toward him, he looked away from her, pretending to look somewhere else. Sometimes their eyes met. When that happened, his heart was pounding and it felt like it was about to stop. Several days later, there were times when she seemed to look at him in a friendly way.
He hated the bus because it was uncomfortable due to the heat. A couple of days after he started to take the bus, he noticed that the same people took the same bus everyday. One of them was a young lady who looked around 25 years old. She looked too sophisticated for a 19 years old man. He looked at the woman with respect and longing and he came to look forward to taking the bus because of the beautiful lady. When he sat at the same seat, she usually sat on the opposite side.
When she didn't face Mr. Ishiguro, he gazed at her. When she looked toward him, he looked away from her, pretending to look somewhere else. Sometimes their eyes met. When that happened, his heart was pounding and it felt like it was about to stop. Several days later, there were times when she seemed to look at him in a friendly way.
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